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The Girl Who Stopped Believing in Dreams

The Girl Who Stopped Believing in Dreams

Under the silver lustre of an aluminous pearl 
She sits and lists her tears and fears 
Soft wishes unfurl 
That stack up to become heavy dreams 
Which tip the stars from their anchors 
Forcing their once subtle light 
to forge heavy beams 

Suppressing her soul, she retreats 
Burying what she has left, inside a fractured heartbeat 
No more tears shall she cry 
In fear she would lose the sky 
and all its wonderful stars might fall forever 

She endeavours to fix a few
Gingerly attempting to climb the night sky and make anew

Her attempts prove futile 
As each star she touches crumbles in her outstretched hands 
Falling like sand 
Lost in the land beneath 
With each fallen star 
Her heart staggers to beat 

Forlorn and weary-eyed 
She looks up at her sky 
And convinces herself all this was meant to be
Her heart begins to fray 
Believing she’s a girl whose dreams were never meant to see the light of day

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Being Me

Never ever give up on your dreams. Some want them to happen? Some wish they would happen but there are the ones that make them happen. You have a dream? Make it happen. Sometimes the paths that lead to it are heartbreaking and difficult..but when you realise your dreams that journey becomes soooo worth it. Follow your dreams x

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Gwendoline

Thank you for your kind words of encouragement, you are truly a lovely soul ? 

thanks so much for reading and the like x

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Valerie Beasley...

Gwendoline....love this write!

I an still waiting for "the dream to come to fruition"....living my life....going through whatever, and surviving...anticipating something better and never, ever giving up.

val

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Gwendoline

Thanks ever so much Val, I loved reading your comment today. I hope one day those dreams become a reality for you. May your life be one happy adventure. Thank you so much for reading this poem :) 

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Shaun Cronick

Hold on to your dreams for they're all you've got to follow, never give up on them or ever lose sight too. Keep believing.
For a soul would become lost within itself and become tragically vacant.
A great and sad theme to ponder over Gwen and beautifully written too.
And love how there's no closure for this sad mite just left hanging there undetermined and unresolved.
Thanks Gwen and stay poetry blessed my friend.❤️😊.
 

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Gwendoline

Thank you again for such attentiveness towards my work. For your insight, which is always so valuable to the writer. Keep being your good self Shaun. For you shine on Cosmo my friend :) x 

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