THE HANDS OF JOHN
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The hands of the old man, too deep the lines I see,
The colour of paper bag browned by the sea,
Each line tells a story, each story another line to be.
When young and before growing too old
Those hands ventured well over the stormy sea,
In the tragedy of war, they have been from heaven to hell
-Not understood by you and me
The callous in those hands, hard like the bark of a tree,
Mended nets and filled the cups:
Lips get thirsty at deep sea
-Life was not easy like the life of you and me
Those hands were kind and gentle
When away from over the seas,
They rocked the cradle of a child or two
-Not heard by you and me
One day those hands wanted to pass on
And give at least a little bit,
They became the hands of a Karate Master
-To teach you and me
Now those hands are in quiet repose
Resting crossed upon his chest
The hands of our Seishi John
-Loved by you and me.
--This is his life story
R.I.P Seishi John
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I really like the occasional repetition of "not known by you and me" and the line "not easy like the life of you and me." It gives the impression of being aimed directly at the reader rather than just the writer who is like a sort of Sherlock Holmes in deducing from the hands the life this person has had. And I really love that about your poem. Almost like you are saying "elementary my dear reader."
"The colour of paper bag browned by the sea" is a brilliant line. My favourite. And I like how the person about whom you write became a karate master. It brings a spirituality to it and makes me think it's about someone you know.
It really warms my heart when you take the time to, not only read, but to
feel and understand my poems, dearest Bernie. Because your perception and the sensitive way you understand it, I just have to share this with you.This is real. Very real. Seishi John was my beloved Karate Master who passed away a few years ago. I wrote this poem and thought I would read at his funeral. I didn't have the courage. Now I feel that I can share it. It is the story of his life.
Hey you are very welcome Bernadette. Thank you for sharing that with me. I really do appreciate it. Your lack of courage would also have been mine. You are a unique writer with a gift for putting the right words together.
Thank you for the lovely comments you make about me.
The deep respect and indeed love you describe here for the Sensei in question suggests this is either autobiographical, or reflects a fair degree of insight into the bond that I personally know can develop between a Teacher and his or her students ..
My own Sensei is also no longer around in the physical sense .. but I still feel him and remain his devoted Jun Kenshi .. Neville
I am happy you asked, Neville. Seishi John Davidson was our beloved oldest Master and passed away at age 85 and he was a legend. This poem is a tribute to him. This is the story of his life. He fought the Mau Mau war or rebellion in Kenya in the 50s. He had a hard life when young, in England, he started as child soldier. Eventually moved to NZ,
I wrote this poem but didn’t have the courage to read it at his funeral.
By mistake I put it on contest, it should have been placed on Poetry.
It’s my favourite poem.
Beautiful, respectfully dignified. Just beautiful. 🌹