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The Haunting at Walmart    

The Haunting at Walmart    

At first I thought it was just a lack of sleep hallucination 

Working the over-night shift at ‘Wally World’, alone  

But near four-am, there it was! I was hearing it again

Something fell on the ground in the produce aisle

A voice called my name from out the dark shadows

Had a door been left open by accident? A possibility

So I walked to the office and checked out the security

No, everything showed up green; just me in the building

One at a time I turned on the bright lights,

not a soul could be seen or a movement detected

 Then I heard it again, in the Halloween section

 someone in flip flops, wandering; it sounded like   

So I stood defiantly, carefully looking all around

 I shouted, I was ex-CIA, Navy Seal, and didn’t fear Satan

But not a shrill or a peep; silence was the only sound

When I decided to walk away, the lights went off and on

Section by section, and the voice called my name again

I wanted to run, but my feet were sticking, knees buckling

 heart pounding out my chest 

 Out went the lights, and stayed out, I saw the ‘exit’ sign

And ran like a legion of demons were chasing close behind

My hand hit the glass, body ricocheted, and I fell on the floor 

Shaking like a leaf, I forget the code to opened the door

when I saw the clock, say 11:11; I quickly punched that in;

 a voice in my head saying that it was four in the morning.

 And It worked, I was outside, safe in the empty parking lot  

 Then the front door slid open by itself right in front of me

  A rat scurried past the garbage can and ran into the store

 She appeared on the other side of the glass studying me

 looking like a fish eyed cadaver with curlers in her hair

  then she disappeared, power thrown up in the air,

 and I fainted right then and there, that’s all I can remember         

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sparrowsong

Hello Christopher...

Sounds like a real ghostly experience or...

Could you be watching to many ghost stories?

I have had a few experiences with spirits...

Fortunately or unfortunately I knew who most of them were...

There were a few I wasn't sure who they were...

It's been over a year since my last experience so far...

They will feed off fear...

You need to let them know you're aware of them...

They will follow you...

They will get in your vehicles...

You need to keep them close to you in a certain  way so they won't harm you or your children...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Christopher Correia

great comment, Sparrowsong....I was born in the tropics with no tv, walking down the road at night could turn into a 'ghost story'  lol, I know what they are....seen one, just avoided seeing another, the poem came to me last night, it's not based on anything 'real' and was intended to be funny or at least entertaining, I'm experimenting with music videos in the writes, any excuse to play AD/DC, lol...cheers pal 

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Rose Sho

Hi Chris....read through your writes....you are a talented writer. Enjoyed all I've read. 

Rose

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Christopher Correia

glad to hear that, Rose, and I love your work as well, wow, so many amazing writers on this site right now, am giddy with the joy of reading, this is freaking awesome....cheers

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Christopher Correia

hey my sis, hugs....I'm so glad you laughed at this one, I was shaking my head when it came to me, lol...I'm not really big on the blood and gore graphic stuff, but I do enjoy telling a ghost story, and I got a million of them, lol, they are fun....omg, this 11:11 thing is in my head, I randomly turn to my cell phone or a clock and see that ofter, it is weird....no, it's hard to make up a ghost story that takes place in Walmart, the place is way scarier with living people stampeding for sales at this time of year, lol....enjoy your evening my sister...thanks for commenting on this weird one, go AC/DC!

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J A Overton

awesome write Chris, love these spooky ones, the imagery portrayed is good and as i read a shiver went down my spine so to sum this up in two words SPINE TINGLING!!!

cheers jeff

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Sugar Well

Well I don't like thrillers I'm so scary .... And sir let me just say this was scary.... Well done

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