The Haunting at Walmart

At first I thought it was just a lack of sleep hallucination
Working the over-night shift at ‘Wally World’, alone
But near four-am, there it was! I was hearing it again
Something fell on the ground in the produce aisle
A voice called my name from out the dark shadows
Had a door been left open by accident? A possibility
So I walked to the office and checked out the security
No, everything showed up green; just me in the building
One at a time I turned on the bright lights,
not a soul could be seen or a movement detected
Then I heard it again, in the Halloween section
someone in flip flops, wandering; it sounded like
So I stood defiantly, carefully looking all around
I shouted, I was ex-CIA, Navy Seal, and didn’t fear Satan
But not a shrill or a peep; silence was the only sound
When I decided to walk away, the lights went off and on
Section by section, and the voice called my name again
I wanted to run, but my feet were sticking, knees buckling
heart pounding out my chest
Out went the lights, and stayed out, I saw the ‘exit’ sign
And ran like a legion of demons were chasing close behind
My hand hit the glass, body ricocheted, and I fell on the floor
Shaking like a leaf, I forget the code to opened the door
when I saw the clock, say 11:11; I quickly punched that in;
a voice in my head saying that it was four in the morning.
And It worked, I was outside, safe in the empty parking lot
Then the front door slid open by itself right in front of me
A rat scurried past the garbage can and ran into the store
She appeared on the other side of the glass studying me
looking like a fish eyed cadaver with curlers in her hair
then she disappeared, power thrown up in the air,
and I fainted right then and there, that’s all I can remember
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Hello Christopher...
Sounds like a real ghostly experience or...
Could you be watching to many ghost stories?
I have had a few experiences with spirits...
Fortunately or unfortunately I knew who most of them were...
There were a few I wasn't sure who they were...
It's been over a year since my last experience so far...
They will feed off fear...
You need to let them know you're aware of them...
They will follow you...
They will get in your vehicles...
You need to keep them close to you in a certain way so they won't harm you or your children...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
great comment, Sparrowsong....I was born in the tropics with no tv, walking down the road at night could turn into a 'ghost story' lol, I know what they are....seen one, just avoided seeing another, the poem came to me last night, it's not based on anything 'real' and was intended to be funny or at least entertaining, I'm experimenting with music videos in the writes, any excuse to play AD/DC, lol...cheers pal
Hi Chris....read through your writes....you are a talented writer. Enjoyed all I've read.
Rose
glad to hear that, Rose, and I love your work as well, wow, so many amazing writers on this site right now, am giddy with the joy of reading, this is freaking awesome....cheers
Wow Chris, I honestly would pee my pants! well write piece
lol, too funny, Lisa, I would for sure....cheers
hey my sis, hugs....I'm so glad you laughed at this one, I was shaking my head when it came to me, lol...I'm not really big on the blood and gore graphic stuff, but I do enjoy telling a ghost story, and I got a million of them, lol, they are fun....omg, this 11:11 thing is in my head, I randomly turn to my cell phone or a clock and see that ofter, it is weird....no, it's hard to make up a ghost story that takes place in Walmart, the place is way scarier with living people stampeding for sales at this time of year, lol....enjoy your evening my sister...thanks for commenting on this weird one, go AC/DC!
awesome write Chris, love these spooky ones, the imagery portrayed is good and as i read a shiver went down my spine so to sum this up in two words SPINE TINGLING!!!
cheers jeff
Well I don't like thrillers I'm so scary .... And sir let me just say this was scary.... Well done