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THE IMPENETRABLE HEART

THE IMPENETRABLE HEART

A heart impenetrable, is a heart that has suffered painĀ 
Lost in conflict, fighting for love to once more reign

ThoseĀ eyes have shed tears, like a waterfallsĀ after storm
The mind has beenĀ confusedĀ til, clarity and calm are born

Love will find a way, to mend the mostĀ shatteredĀ heart
It can dry upĀ woeful teardrops, that came easy from the start

Love will heal theĀ mind that wasĀ lost behind sorrowsĀ door
Love is theĀ emotionalĀ key freeingĀ hope and faith,Ā to restore

In addition, timeĀ is a factor to cureĀ those feelings of despair
Give regret and hurt,Ā time enoughĀ to rebuild and repair

Let not your heart be impenetrable,Ā just let itĀ rest awhile
For after storms comes sunshine, after frowns come smiles

Love can conquer all if you let it! try make it your destiny
Reap happiness not sadness for yourself, for all eternityĀ 
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Tony Taylor

Hey dear DEBS!!......I Love the way you arranged the phrasing here..... so that the rhyme in your ear has a rhythmic repetition...... driving home the Ā lovely idea and intent here..... once your heart has experienced that inexplicable pain...... it truly does become impenetrable...... til you make up your mind to let LOVE in again........VERY cool read...... mixed with the powerful advice of "knowing"........ALL STARS!!....... well done my friend........ great subject matter here....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Ā  ?

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Deborah Evans

Hi Tony Thank you for great feed back on this writeĀ 
yes you are right IĀ know how the painĀ feels
but I am open to love now justĀ wrote it all Ā down
in a poem
Thanks again my friend Love n hugs Debs xoĀ 
Ā 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Tony My comment reads really curt IĀ hadnt
finished my sentence so sorry about that. It was meant to read
I wrote it in a poem as always, to show the feeling I felt at the time
me bad :-(
Hugs DebsĀ 

Ā 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Wendy Thanks so muchĀ 
For your kind wordsĀ 
Best wishes Debs x

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Lisa Poetess Ā Thank youĀ 
for your kind comments Ā 
Best wishes DebsĀ 

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Rose Sho

The heart seems impenetrable after being hurt.....there is usually a closure from within that make the heart truly impenetrable but there is always another heart that would surelyĀ  penetrate....It's just a matter of time

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Sweet Rose Yes A heart needs to healĀ 
to be able to love againĀ 
Thank you for your comments always a pleasureĀ 
to read my friendĀ 
Lots of love DebsĀ 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Susan Thank you for stopping byĀ 
and for your kind words
Best wishes Debs xĀ 
Ā 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

The heart is a lonely hunter. Ā Sometimes, instead of "finding love", the shattered heart has lost it. Ā Sometimes, the cure to it being whole again is not available for quite awhile. Ā Love does conquer all, but it's loss can be a devastating defeat. Ā However, if one can follow your words of wisdom, they will find themselves on an expedited road to recovery.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Larry You explainĀ it so wellĀ 
Thank you for your kind words my friendĀ 
love n hugs Debs xox

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