THE INDOMITABLE SPIRIT
She had an indomitable spirit born of a
lifetime lived through the hardest of times
Every misery and heartache she had endured
she remained steadfast and not resigned
Her earliest memories were of herself at
young age begging on the streets, for she starved
A penny here a penny there any morsel of food
she acquired with her brother she halved
Her brother was always a sickly child due to
not having the nourishment of a daily meal
But she so loved him and would go without
herself just to see him smile and beam
Their parents had passed in the great depression
in the year of nineteen twenty nine
While queing for work her mother had passed away
through hunger while she stood in line
Her father had built a shack of cardboard to
live in when they were thrown out on the street
No job and no money no rent could be payed
and they scavenged for food like rats to eat
Her dad passed in a brawl as he entered
fist fights to win a paltry amounts of money
He was beaten to a pulp one day never recovered
and she witnessed his death which was so ugly
Her brother died later of rickets, bones so deformed
through lack of vitamins in thirty two
Everyone she loved had died but the life force
she felt inside her helped to get her through
Eventually she got off the streets regained her
self respect and dignity, all on her own merit
A heroine really, through sheer determination
to survive, and her undying indomitable spirit
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Comments
Hi Cherie I only had the title early this morning to
this write and the story came from i don`t know where:-)
I looked up the great depression to make sure i had the
truth of some of the times they endured , and although
it is sad i was quite pleased with how it turned out.
Thank you for your great comments They mean a lot
love n hugs Debs xox
Hey DEBS!!......VERY powerful narrative here...... amazing that it came from your imagination and your gift for painting pictures through phrasing and creativity........ this is a compelling display of your ability to wield words..........ALL STARS.......a pleasure to read........ high fives girlfriend!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo
Hi Tony Thank you for your great comments
I find when i write these narratives i usually only have a title
and only know where i am going with it maybe after the
first four lines where something just comes
to my mind from somewhere
Glad you enjoyed love n hugs Debs xo
Great tribute to the human spirit.
Hi Kimmy Thank you for the comment
Glad you enjoyed
Best wishes Debs
Hi Dear Debs,
Wow. What a beautiful narrative of the post depression years. From riches to rags, the multitudes suffered. But somehow, miraculously through her "indomitable spirit" your heroine survived adversity that few could. I think you omitted the last verse, that she had to be Wonder Woman, possessing super human powers just to survive. Lovely story. Thumbs up!
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hi Larry I read a few stories of the aftermath of the
Great Depression they were so sad how people were forced to
live and the diseases the children had through lack of food were terrible
Glad you liked this one and Thank you for the comments
Love n hugs Debs xox