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Marion

It took me ages to read this Greg, had to reread several times to finds its meaning...which is...'taking the piss'..lol...excellent ???

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Greg Etsell

Thank you it took me ages to write to lol 

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Marion

Yes...I can see that by the well thought out phrases and the effort you took to convey meaning with your colourful prose, and really it's one of those excellent verses that compelled the reader to take whatever meaning is most relevent to themselves, I wouldn't be surprised if you win ?????

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Greg Etsell

thank you agin I woke up at 130 am  thought of this poem I  I laughed and went back to sleep next day I wrote it  Lol

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Marion

Glad you did...its created a bit of light hearted banter which I have thoroughly enjoyed. ?

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