Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Marion

It took me ages to read this Greg, had to reread several times to finds its meaning...which is...'taking the piss'..lol...excellent ???

Reply
author
Greg Etsell

Thank you it took me ages to write to lol 

Reply
author
Marion

Yes...I can see that by the well thought out phrases and the effort you took to convey meaning with your colourful prose, and really it's one of those excellent verses that compelled the reader to take whatever meaning is most relevent to themselves, I wouldn't be surprised if you win ?????

Reply
author
Greg Etsell

thank you agin I woke up at 130 am  thought of this poem I  I laughed and went back to sleep next day I wrote it  Lol

Reply
author
Marion

Glad you did...its created a bit of light hearted banter which I have thoroughly enjoyed. ?

Reply
Poem -

The world covered in daisies

The world covered in daisies

The world covered in daisies
Here I lay in the field of daisies
Feeling lazy away from this...

Poem -

Inside the mind

Inside the mind

Inside the mind It can play
Tricks and Games with
Letters and numbers and people
...

Poem -

That cold winter wind

That cold winter wind

I sit here looking out
My window watching
Two squirrels that
Are running around...

Latest poems in Haiku

Poem -

Losing Yourself

Losing Yourself

Snow falling softly,
I'm alone for the first time,
I don't know myself.

Poem -

Haiku 3

As you're on TV,
Just as lovely in a dream,
Catriona Rowntree.

Poem -

Haiku number 2

Think I like the theme;
Happiness is a fleeting
Ticker tape parade.

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com