Poem -
The Jealousy Of The Roses
Dedicated to Julie
A very elegant blue eyed flower,
Grew proudly near a myrtle bower.
Where white roses graced the spot,
Who envied the little Forget-me-not.
Oh simple flower, the roses cried,
You embody a power to us denied.
And display the language of the heart,
With a sweeter colour than we impart.
For weeks the roses jealousies grew,
They stole said flowers tinge of blue.
Proclaiming, Oh how blest our lot,
We're now like you, Forget-me-not.
Dedicated to Julie and her enchanted gardening green fingers.
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why does it have to be? why can't we just cheer each other on!? great write Shaun!.................................................................Jim
Hi Shaun. I just love this ingenuis little wonderful write! Its so cute to read about flowers and it could easily be humans as flowers. Pinned! Pxx
Pratibha many thanks for your always kind comments and just for the record I have another one in the works maybe tonight or tomorrow night with a Forget- me- not and some cruel black roses.
That one is little bit more magical and dedicate it to your good for your great achievement with your joy to read poetry book Tangles and Knots.
Thanks again and simply enjoy life.😃❤️
Oh and it's called The Little Forget-Me-Not.😃
I really look forward to reading another flower piece! The title has grabbed me already! Appreciate any dedication Shaun...its just so lovely of you...thank you! I love it that you so loved my book :) :) ;)
I wanted to post a poem on here but images not uploading so cant do it yet...u see the image is the reason I wrote it so its pointless if I cant post the image....watch this space it will come.....my last week's one is one here though Px
Pratibha it is the least I can do and hopefully tonight but tomorrow at the latest it's really all there, just got to edit and polish a bit more and usually the idea of the theme and then its closing verse comes first then work in reverse.
And the images are a real bummer to lose and hopefully they sort it out and will let us upload the desired image to each poem.
After all a picture is worth a thousand words and all that.
And I know EXACTLY what you mean when you say the image is the reason for writing said poem to go hand in hand with your desired image.
And I'm off to read your last week's one my poetic and respected poetry pen- friend.
Hang in there Pratibha and simply enjoy life and poetry and all the good those two magical things can bestow😃❤️.
:) Pxx
Greg thank you kind sir for liking pinning and the generous five stars you have bestowed and I'm a happy man knowing you enjoyed reading it.
Thanks again and wish you well sir.
Bloody brilliant Shaun! Your last few poems have been a smash hit! Just fantastic fantastic poetry. Perhaps you should have entered that contest instead of me eh? Love your work
Fantastic poem Shaun. Thank you so much for the dedication. Means a lot.