Poem - 19 June 2017, 22:45

The listener

The listener

In the end of thoughts
in the end of now

i drifted into light

Only to find dust

I am back to the beginning

My Soul have survived
What i was promised

Only you would question

Does it really matter

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Tony Taylor20 June 2017, 08:19

Wow LORRIS!!!....I think this is may be my favorite write of yours!!..... it has an immaculately crafted sensibility to it!! Documenting one man's evolution of the soul......" I drifted into light ~Only to find dust ".....ALL STARS!! PINNED!!..... truly compelling piece my friend!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xl ?☀✴✳♥

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Lorris Morris22 June 2017, 18:13

Thank You Tony

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