Poem -
The Love In His Light
His light lingersÂ
Like soft flecks of warm breath on my skinÂ
Reminding me to not give inÂ
To brave the ever rising waveÂ
No one sails through life unscathedÂ
He has tasted the bitter and the sweet
Never afraid to place his feet
beneath a setting sunÂ
For he knowsÂ
Even in darknessÂ
Light growsÂ
He challenges my self doubtÂ
Ever devout to seek the truthÂ
He feeds my seeds of thoughtsÂ
Which fruit
In plain sightÂ
His effervescent lightÂ
I am beholdenÂ
Transfixed towards
his ardent gazeÂ
Where I findÂ
Peace insideÂ
A place where I feel saved
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Comments
Nice Gwen - well done.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Many thanks Terry so glad you liked itÂ
Gwen xÂ
wow!!!!!!!! another greatÂ
poem love ti
Yay Greg thank you so much for your wonderful words and the pinÂ
Gwen x
I imagine there are gonna be a whole load of guys out here who wish these words were writ only for them .. aint I the lucky one ... sorry fella's :)
Lol Neville you have the best humour đ thanks for your pin today my friend. I hope all is well in your world xÂ
Beautiful poetry Gwen , I sense the person to be someone real, as your words have such strong emotion and conviction in your feelings that you do so well to convey to the reader :Â
"Â Reminding me to not give inÂ
To brave the ever rising waveÂ
No one sails through life unscathed "
How inspiring these lines are for anyone to read, it's universal advice for any and all troubles one may be going through...... WELL DONE , you make loving poetry easy and contagious ...
đ§ĄRob , đ's đ' and đed!!Â
Wow Rob you have always been so astute with your feedback on poetry. This is such a delight to read. Yes this is indeed about a real person. Someone who has helped me see the good in myself and the hidden strength I didnât really know I had. He has made me believe in myself. He is definitely my beacon in life. Thank you for your lovely words. I have missed your amazing commentary my talented poetic friend. Thanks for the pin which I think Cosmo has not quite caught up with. It does that sometimes. All the best to you, I look forward to delving into more of your work đ xxÂ
Wow, beautiful poetry, Gwen it really is. I thought it had a spiritual feel about it and was lead along tgat track until I read Rob suggesting it was a real person. So, a real person! So glad he , whoever he is, has helped you so much. Beautiful poem x
Hello Tina, so glad you liked it. Yes sometimes people enter your life and lift your spirit. Thanks for your lovely words xxÂ
" Ever devout to seek the truth" One of my most favorite lines ever discovered Gwen! thank you for sharing!................................Jim
Jim I am thrilled with your words my friend. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and again for the time given on my scribbles :)Â
I do hope life is going well for you and all those near and dearÂ
Gwen x
This is such brilliantly delivered love.....this kind of self expression is obviously motivated by love.....and as such I have to say one of your finest pieces of wordplay....it would make anyone beyond happy to receive such a gift from you......you are a gift to this site Gwen......I only wish we could both be on here more regularly.....can't wait for the world to discover your gifts dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......fantastic writing!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....thanx for making my heart fill with joy love!!......T xo : )
Thanks lovely for reading this one :) so happy you found these words and hope we both can get more actively back on here soon. Life is unpredictably crazy at times. More so than ever these days xxÂ
Wow...lucky to have caught this one Gwen...how'd I miss it first time around?
Honestly?...it's stunning, it really is a marvelous soulful verse, i can actually picture a dying swan being rescued, fed, revived by love...your poetry shines xx
Awe Marion a dying swan is a good metaphor my friend. Thanks for reading this one. Hope your weekend is going as well as it can xxÂ