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The love you gave me.

The love you gave me.

Ever since you have left me I feel unloved. Cuz no one ever loved me the same way you did, no one payed attention like you did, you were the light to my sunshine whenever Im sad i think about you so a part of me can feel loved again. You were seeing the bad in urself while I was seeing the good in you cuz ever since we stared dating thats all you have showed me that you are not like other boys you showed me that you was different. Maybe in another life we can start all over again. And if we won’t I will think about you forever. -lily

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Bernadete van d...

Welcome to Cosmo, Lily!
I am a bit late, but again, a big welcome. 
Bernadete 

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Dr. Shakira Nan...

This poem poignantly expresses the deep sense of loss and longing after a significant relationship ends. The speaker reflects on the unique love they experienced, highlighting the contrast between their partner's self-perception and the way they were seen through the speaker's eyes. The idea of wanting to reconnect in another life adds a touch of wistfulness, emphasizing the lasting impact of that love.

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