Poem -
The Merchant's Love letter
Yaddira I am in chains of darkness
and I hold not my destiny,
I live to bathe in your cool silent waters
and put rose peddles on your bed;
before the rising of the sun--
hold this humble merchant like a love letter
let your breasts fall softly in my callous hands
give me the taste of your lips to carry
as I comfort the spread of your shoulder
...inhale contentment; Yaddira
and speak no more,
of bitterness and sorrow
let joy enter in with silent moans
smile,
sing the kind of music I live for
softly, grip me, peel me, drown me
serendipity lives in a blush
put away salty tears in my presence...
cursed be the thought of leaving
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Hello Sir Christopher...
A great mix here...
Reminds me of The Great Gatsby, The Sound of Music, topped off with a bed of roses...
I felt like I was waiting for the curtain to close...
Getting ready for the next scene...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
wow, sparrowsong; all that! lol, glad you enjoyed, appreciate the great comment as well
Hi Chris, this was absolutely amazingly romantic. Great write, lovely lovely lines. Lots of love and hugs. Cheers.
glad you enjoyed, Cleo, hugs and love to you as well, my friend
excellent last four lines are amazing
thanks mark, great comment man, I agree about the last four lines, lol....cheers brother
Hi Christopher Such a beautiful romantic sensual
poem of a passionate love between the merchant
and the lady I can see him sending this
poem to her
So enjoyed this piece
best wishes Debs
thanks deborah, best wishes to you as well, enjoyed your comment very much, glad you saw that, in appreciation for your kindness, cheers
Beautiful !!
Vani, thank you for Beautiful comment, cheers!
Dear Christopher,
His love for "Yaddira" is all encompassing. Even her name, an ancient one, is mesmerizing. Your words are intoxicating. May she sing him sacred love songs forever.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
hey Larry,
thanks for making a great comment, I enjoy when a comment is focused on the actual write, instead of the writer, so your comment means a lot to me, I won't take any credit for this one, it was a joy to write and basically appeared from thin air, I suspect that I'll ruin it by editing at some point, though, thanks again for great comment, Larry