The Old Man Writing Poetry

I wish to be an old man sitting by the sea
spending all my time composing poetry
and everything that moves gives inspiration
twitches my pen to get in motion
from a rude child shouting at hisย mother
to the mad ramblings of a street philosopher
there's a woman licking ice cream ferociously
who catches me staring and smiles over to me
but I cut my eyes, annoyed at her interruption;
I was right in the middle of a great composition
so let the summer drive past, and flowers bloom
I'll beย by the sea, snacking on my mushrooms
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AH!! The sweet mystery of life that surrounds you!!...........I LOVE this slice of time........... eloquently observant and sweetly annoyed by its magnificence......... In an altered state of consciousness I sit by the sea.......... writing poetry.......... wow!!......... this is amazing Mamma Jamma!!........... perhaps I misinterpreted this a bit......... but it's where your words took me........... and your words ALWAYS transport me..............Thanx for this brother poet.......... enjoyed it very much!!......... high fives!!.........T xo
HI ย Chris ย Really enjoyed your poem and it is trueย
inspiration comes from many things i have wriiten afterย
watching a film, and also just words pop in my head
and i write, ย or lookingย out of the window
Iย enjoy your work ย always a good story
ย Warm regards.. Debsย
hey sis, thanks for yourย comment...and that is an interesting theory on why writers write, perhaps it's why 'you' write, but I find the comment a wee bit ambitious on your part in that you seem to want to speak for an entire community of writers, personally, I don't write to ...'do what I must do because it is in me to do...' ย poetry is not some kind of mission for me personally; there is waaaay more to life than writing poetry, and I will not speak for why other people write, each has their reason, I reckon and I will respect their reasons....your comment is most interesting, confusing in places but interesting to read, I've had many conversations with poets and I've never heard your theory, it is a good one, just surprised that you spoke on behalf of other poets....sounds a bit cultish, lol....food for thought though, enjoyed....have great day ย ย
that is not why writers write at all...not for fame or fortune...but to simply do what they must do because it is in them to do it
hey T, thanks for comment, glad you liked, lol....not sure what got into me but I felt like writing poetry yesterday, maybe because I got some rest, been working like a dog for close to a month, feel like a human being again, poem was a bit of a parody to be honest, met this poet a while ago who did unusual things to gain inspiration; like making himself homeless and marching across the province, he' s written quite a few books, used to go to my church, met him at a bus stop and we started talking so I invited him home for lunch and he turned out to be quite a dedicated fellow, but odd, he always reminds me of what I hope to never become; obsessive about something that I enjoyย doing, my canary in the coal mine, you might say, lol ....mostly this poem is about me, and how I would like to spend my time if or when I get old, I can't think of a better way to spend my days...cheers man ย
thank you so much for comment, deborah,ย appreciateย
I'd rather be the loony old lady with a houseful of cats, writing about her little babies! lol amazing write sir!