The Old West

Narrowed eyes, 'neath texan crown,
Wingtip heels, black stallion astride,
Search for bilk & bed him down,
Boosy with grief & null of pride.
Blazes venture, brisk up & cracked,
Girls on the line mauled in awe,
Pop skull downed & irons packed,
Deuce becoming, dander's raw.
Steely spurs, dismount & strut,
Old pod awaits the fice,
Beat the dutch, savage low sot,
Nailed to the counter, blood suffice.
Not by a jugful, reach for old blue,
Over head and ears, washy & weed,
Gone goslin, goney nigh due,
Rapid fire cannons, straddle & steed.
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Comments
Well you definitely converted the old west. Great little write.
Thank you.
This definately has a dangerous and savage feel to.it Simon...nice work?
Thank you Marion, feel as though i need to tweak this though, too many phrases I'm guessing lol.
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superb write my friend! I do love your arsenal of beautiful proses
Thank you, youre too kind
I have to say though what I say can be construed as kindness I say this cause I truly mean it..... you my special friend are a gifted writer and I am very honored to read your works and to call you friend