The Old West

Narrowed eyes, 'neath texan crown,
Wingtip heels, black stallion astride,Β
Search for bilk & bed him down,Β
Boosy with grief & null of pride.Β
Blazes venture, brisk up & cracked,Β
Girls on the line mauled in awe,Β
Pop skull downed & irons packed,Β
Deuce becoming, dander's raw.Β
Steely spurs, dismount & strut,Β
Old pod awaits the fice,Β
Beat the dutch, savage low sot,Β
Nailed to the counter, blood suffice.Β
Not by a jugful, reach for old blue,Β
Over head and ears, washy & weed,Β
Gone goslin, goney nigh due,
Rapid fire cannons, straddle & steed.Β
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Comments
Well you definitely converted the old west. Great little write.Β
Thank you.Β
This definately has a dangerous and savage feel to.it Simon...nice work?
Thank you Marion, feel as though i need to tweak this though, too many phrases I'm guessing lol.Β
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superb write my friend! I do love your arsenal of beautiful proses
Thank you, youre too kind
I have to say though what I say can be construed as kindness I say this cause I truly mean it..... you my special friend are a gifted writer and I am very honored to read your works and to call you friend