Poem -
THE OLIVE TREE BY THE SEA
Sitting here by the stone wall
By the olive tree by the seaĀ
Drinking tea the warm sunĀ
on my face what lovely placeĀ
that i am in, the sky is blueĀ
As the clouds pass over
mountains with light breeze
Ā In the air sitting in myĀ
Chair by the olive tree by the
sea by the stone wall as timeĀ
Goes by i sit here drinkingĀ
wine with bread and olive
as the sun goes downĀ
i must leave this town'
By the olive tree by the sea
Ā
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Stunning and soĀ poignant Greg...you are getting better and better!! Pinned ā¤ļø
oh think you Marion oh thank youĀ
it seemed like a heard write but i did
it and i like itĀ
Awww so beautiful imagery Greg full pins etc luvit!!!ā¤ļøšā¤ļø
Thank you Jill this seems so hard to write this poem but I did it keep trying to get there where Iām happy I got my writingĀ
i love itā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Thank you ā¤ļø
Greg nicely well written withĀ great visuals and a superb flow to your poem.
A fabulous journey of a poem.
And the journey is good
Five stars sir and pinned too.
Thank you for writing and sharing and I wish you well.
Thank you so much ShaunĀ
this was hard write it tookĀ
me days to come up withĀ
it the photo didnāt takeĀ
long to find And putting itĀ
up wonder if it was goodĀ
or if could have said moreĀ
but seem fineĀ
It's just awesome Greg. I love it! Let's all go to the olive tree by the sea! Pinned! ššš
Wow Ā Pratibha thank you soĀ
much At first I didnāt think this poem Ā would Ā be that good very hard writeĀ
Took took days to figure out onesĀ i
again thank you very much For reading
You're welcome....writing a simple poem can be a challenge....its simple and effective and it really connect with others. Well done Greg. Px
This is super Greg.. you just transported me back to the island of Crete where I was this time last week ..... NevilleĀ
Where is that that you were at