Poem -
THE OLIVE TREE BY THE SEA
Sitting here by the stone wall
By the olive tree by the seaÂ
Drinking tea the warm sunÂ
on my face what lovely placeÂ
that i am in, the sky is blueÂ
As the clouds pass over
mountains with light breeze
 In the air sitting in myÂ
Chair by the olive tree by the
sea by the stone wall as timeÂ
Goes by i sit here drinkingÂ
wine with bread and olive
as the sun goes downÂ
i must leave this town'
By the olive tree by the sea
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Stunning and so poignant Greg...you are getting better and better!! Pinned ❤️
oh think you Marion oh thank youÂ
it seemed like a heard write but i did
it and i like itÂ
Awww so beautiful imagery Greg full pins etc luvit!!!❤️💙❤️
Thank you Jill this seems so hard to write this poem but I did it keep trying to get there where I’m happy I got my writingÂ
i love it❤️❤️❤️
Thank you ❤️
Greg nicely well written with great visuals and a superb flow to your poem.
A fabulous journey of a poem.
And the journey is good
Five stars sir and pinned too.
Thank you for writing and sharing and I wish you well.
Thank you so much ShaunÂ
this was hard write it tookÂ
me days to come up withÂ
it the photo didn’t takeÂ
long to find And putting itÂ
up wonder if it was goodÂ
or if could have said moreÂ
but seem fineÂ
It's just awesome Greg. I love it! Let's all go to the olive tree by the sea! Pinned! đź’śđź’śđź’ś
Wow  Pratibha thank you soÂ
much At first I didn’t think this poem  would  be that good very hard writeÂ
Took took days to figure out ones i
again thank you very much For reading
You're welcome....writing a simple poem can be a challenge....its simple and effective and it really connect with others. Well done Greg. Px
This is super Greg.. you just transported me back to the island of Crete where I was this time last week ..... NevilleÂ
Where is that that you were at