The One Who Broke My Heart
I wish I could blame youÂ
But I'll never hate youÂ
Since I never had youÂ
I don't have the rightÂ
I want to be free fromÂ
My own expectationsÂ
It is only my faultÂ
For setting them so highÂ
And I want to cry outÂ
But nobody listensÂ
To someone like me
Who self destructsÂ
Under the pressureÂ
The might of an oceanÂ
My thoughts and emotionsÂ
Are compromisedÂ
I want to be strongerÂ
I wanted to fightÂ
But it got too painfulÂ
To see her by your sideÂ
Maybe she'd offerÂ
You something I couldn'tÂ
I could only wish you
"Good luck in life"
I wanted to blame youÂ
But I love you too muchÂ
After all this lost effortÂ
And all of this blackness
I am the oneÂ
Who broke my heartÂ
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Comments
It's brutal...because it's true. Anyone who's ever written a verse in despair can see their own shame and self-loathing in that line! I know I can.
The real power of this poem lies in the shortness of the lines.
Each one is a quick, vicious punch in the heart {your heart, his heart, the reader's??...maybe all of us?!}.
Marvellously wrought.
J ;)
well written -- mirrors my pain thanks
Thank you)
Hello Yana...
Very painfully beautiful!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
HahaÂ
Hugs right back~