Poem -
The One Who Broke My Heart
I wish I could blame you
But I'll never hate you
Since I never had you
I don't have the right
I want to be free from
My own expectations
It is only my fault
For setting them so high
And I want to cry out
But nobody listens
To someone like me
Who self destructs
Under the pressure
The might of an ocean
My thoughts and emotions
Are compromised
I want to be stronger
I wanted to fight
But it got too painful
To see her by your side
Maybe she'd offer
You something I couldn't
I could only wish you
"Good luck in life"
I wanted to blame you
But I love you too much
After all this lost effort
And all of this blackness
I am the one
Who broke my heart
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Comments
It's brutal...because it's true. Anyone who's ever written a verse in despair can see their own shame and self-loathing in that line! I know I can.
The real power of this poem lies in the shortness of the lines.
Each one is a quick, vicious punch in the heart {your heart, his heart, the reader's??...maybe all of us?!}.
Marvellously wrought.
J ;)
well written -- mirrors my pain thanks
Thank you)
Hello Yana...
Very painfully beautiful!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Haha
Hugs right back~