Poem -

Tied

Tied

Goodbye, 
Lost
In thoughts of suicide
Rope burned neck
Sadly I climbed
Suddenly a slip
A falling cry
Then no grip
Would of died
​Had that other end been tied

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Being Me

Oh my goodness how sad! To be in a place where you see no reason to carry on living is just awful. Thank heavens that rope was not tied. Hopefully you will see better days. There are always reasons for living and sometimes those reasons come later on. Take care x

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Rickie Bohannan

Thank you for your reply and yes this was a very dark time in my life as my 17 year old daughter had just died in a very bad car accident and I was slowly losing everything piece by piece. I was very thankful that the other end wasn't tied and it opened my eyes immediately. I'm still climbing but the good part is that I'm no longer falling and that alone is a great feeling.
Take Care and again thank you for your reply.

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Being Me

I am sorry that you lost your daughter. I can only imagine the pain that must have brought you. I am glad that you are still climbing x

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