The Path

Lead me down the path my dear, take me by my chain.
Spike me in the vein my dear -
lead us both to fame.
Through the fields of fire, salt and crevased lanes - up above the grass we rise - till nothing is still sane.
From the sky we draw to us, the seeds of love and pain,
dwindle in the depths of lust -then wash it down the drain.
The roses have all faded - scolded by the flames.
Grasp me by the wrist my dear tonight we make our names.
Hold me tight and touch me close - we each become a host.
Silence now my pretty one, we should make the most.
Entangled in the sweat and tears come screams of salty joy.
The flowers bloom the flames ahoy..Β
for a moment we are coy.
So deep we breathe the air that's near - baffled by the smoke.
A world of dreams we enter now...
You can be my love.
(c) cgs 1993.
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Hello PREACHER!!..... what a well delivered narrative tale....... done in an extended kind of limerick rhyme scheme!!..... truly compelling work here ~Β
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Stunning phrasing painting gorgeous imagery in the minds eye of the reader!!......ALL STARS!!....... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLYΒ delivered dear poet brother!!.......... Love & Rockets!!......T xoΒ ?β΄β€
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Masterfully crafted art ...preacher ??
Well done indeed good Preacher this was a work of art and your brush is mighty. I loved the rhythm and how there was a calm but resolute tone about the whole thing, kudos fellow poet.
Curious
Lovely write