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THE PERSON I AM I OWE TO YOU

THE PERSON I AM I OWE TO YOU

The strength and resolve i have today
is because of you my dearest mother
You taught me from the smallest child
To follow what was best for me not any other

You gave me so much support when i carried
my own children, always lending a hand
Even being there at the birth of my daughter
a beautiful memory you becoming a gran

And wow what a great grandmother you were
you always gave praise where it was due
With my children`s achievements in education
and work and so forth, to name but a few
  
You also moulded me in to someone who had
respect and manners towards our fellow man
Treat people how you would want to be
treated your motto, and i still follow that plan

It has been such a tough time since you left
us all, and so many tears have we cried 
but i know your there up in heaven watching
over us, still with all that love and pride.. 

 

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Greg Etsell

Deborah love your poem and I understand how you feel when your mom is gone and the lessons thay teach us and how live are life from he lessons at time life can be hard and we wish she was around to help we think about it what  she would want us to do and we follow it I know I try ever day, love your poem peace and love to you hugs xxoo

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Greg  Yes it hard when you lose your mother
the guidance they give you all through your life is 
so missed. I think as long as we keep following their 
good advice we wont go far wrong 
Glad you enjoyed Thank you for your comments 
peace and love to you too   Debs xoxo
 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Cherie I know i am bias but my mam was great :-)
she instilled in myself brother and sister good values,
I feel a need every now and then to write a poem 
for her, just to say to her i`m thinking about her. 
I would love to write a little book of poems and dedicate it to her 
i know she would be proud, i have started saving to hopefully do that
Thank you Cherie for your lovely comments as always 
love n hugs Debs xox 
 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

What a beautiful loving tribute to your dear Mother.  It brought a few tears, as I remembered mine.  It sounds like she was a wonderful woman who instilled in you strong values, and lots of love.  You will reunite with her someday, but for  now, she will come to you in glorious dreams that you will treasure forever.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry Thank you for your comments 
I miss my mam lots as do everyone who has lost 
their mam  I Need to let her know through my writes 
i`m thinking  about her every now and then , Thanks for the comforting words
dear  Larry  love n hugs Debs xox
 

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Georgina Richardson

Hi Debs,

This is simply beautiful and had me in floods because I`ve lost my mum too, and it still feels as if it happened only yesterday to her, even though it was 17 years ago. I gave her 6 grandchildren and 13 great grandchildren and her first great great grandchild is coming in the spring, I know she`s proud but I would give anything to hear her say it for real. I treasure the dreams I have where she comes to me, as they are my comfort blanket now.

You have honoured your mum so beautifully here in this piece and I just know that she will be simply beaming with pride sweetie. Well done for a superbly well written and beautiful piece.

Love and hugs

G xx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  G  Thank you so much for your lovely comments
I worshiped my dad but aww mams they teach us so much don`t they
Wow  G thirteen grandchildren i bet they keep you on your toes I 
would love a grandchild but no signs yet lol I just need to tell mam i`m 
thinking about her in my writes, i love dreaming of her too ive woken 
up even trying to touch her and of course you know how that feels too xx
Thanks G love n hugs Debs xx 

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Flower Girl Aww you give me such lovely comments 
Thank you so much i`m glad you enjoyed 
Love n hugs Debs xo

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