Poem -
The Petals Fall
Can you feel them? They're right there.
They're gnawing at the barrier and the walls.
Thoughts and simple words turn into poison.
Rotting and twisting the Sakura tree at its centre.
Making it unstable.
As worrisome thoughts ignite,
The petals fall.
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Comments
Super creative write. A unique take on an unfortunately a very popular topic at the moment... I wish you peace and calm waters. Cosmos is an awesome place to share your thoughts. Smiles. The Fish of the Sea
Thank you, I appreciate your kind words. Sending them straight back at you.
Ahh no problem also Gday from Aus, fellow Aussie poet! Enjoying reading your work!
Heyy! XD I really like your work too! When I saw that you were an Aussie I was like "oo, interesting ".
A good write, I loved the visual of the Sakura tree. I could see those delicate petals falling. Very clever and I always admire a strong message in a short piece ✨👏