Poem -

The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257

The stricken craft
M257 lay stuck
hard and fast upon
her leeward side ..
With fore mast split
from top
through to her tail
waiting on the tide ..
No colours
would she fly again
nor proudly
sail our seven seas ..
She’s waiting
on the salvage crew
to strip her clean
of cargo, ballast
and any bounty hid
they may
yet chance to find
stowed inside
a beach holed hull
and all along her
splintered oaken seams ..

Β 

Like 5 Pin it 3
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Neville

Why thank you kindly and truly tooly Mistress DARKLYΒ 

Reply
author
Lorna

Hi Neville, I enjoyed this
Feels gritty!!Β 
lorna x

Reply
author
Neville

thanks Lorna, it was the view from my roof the other weekend when I was up there re-pointing a chimney .. such a sorry and sad sight for a once proud sea faring vessel .. Neville x

Reply
author
Nine Eleven

This is like a scene from moby dick,Β  I do love a good ship wreck.

Reply
author
Neville

it was the view from my roof the other week when I was trying to re-point a chimney .. such a sorry sight for such a once proud vessel .. many thank you's for stopping by and leaving your mark here .. NevilleΒ 

Reply
author
Being Me

Diving down to a ship wreck must be very interesting. Don't think I'd be brave enough to do it, though. It's kind of sad, being stripped of its cargo. If I was brave enough to dive to a wreck, I'd leave it be. Lovely poem described perfectly. Pinned x

Reply
author
Neville

Thanks Tina .. this was the view from my roof the other weekend when I climbed up to re-point my chimney .. a very sad ending for such a once proud seafaring vessel .. I believe it was tugged away earlier today .. x

Reply
author
Being Me

A very sad ending!Β 

Gosh, you must live pretty close to the sea! How lovely x

Reply
Poem -

Fear of Word Blindness

Banks of blank ivorine
stacked high but
thinly like old oriental
lacquered tsuba .....

Poem -

Fear of Falling

okay, so that's another summer done and dusted ..

As autumn begins,
might this be
the very end of us ..

For today tho’ we cling...

Poem -

When to Listen Lightly

Hey, listen I want to make
love with you
then write us some poetry ..
Which I need...

Latest poems in Freestyle

Poem -

THE TREE - A NONET

THE TREE - A NONET

I am a tree, once I stood alone.
Now others around me have grown....

Poem -

Fear of Word Blindness

Banks of blank ivorine
stacked high but
thinly like old oriental
lacquered tsuba .....

Poem -

FULL OF CRAP

FULL OF CRAP

You notice you're not offered much when it's in pristine condition?

There's not even enough Priests...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com