THE RAVEN AND THE CROW AND THE ROOSTER
The moon is full as the church clock stirkes midnight the church bells rings as midnight mass begins the poor souls sit in the church as thay listen to the priest says his sermon as the children choir sing OH PRMISE ME,The raven flys from grave to grave and the crow CROWS in midnight moon,The priest says the red wine you drink is the blood of JESUS,The moon shines on the river as the crow flys from grave to grave and the raven crows to midnight moon,In a far off distance  a rooster crows to midnight,And priest says lets all prayer for the poor souls in the world As midnight mass end the poor souls walk the graves and the raven and the crow flys away the rooster crows to midnight.
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This is VERY cool GREG!!......a great ambiance created here with excellent word choices weaving an excellent tale through great storytelling!!....... my fav!!~ " The crow CROWS in midnight moon...".......ALL STARZ!!..... well done!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?âłâ´â
thank you Tony I don't like this poem it didn't turn out like I want it to title of the poem should have said THE ROOSTER THAT CROWED TO MIDNIGHT but the raven and the crow got in the way I don't like the line red wine is the blood of Jesus oh well next time write a poem like this it will be better and greater thank you so much for reading all stars to you as well
Dear Greg,
.
The birds sing dirges in the moonlight
As Midnight Mass now comes to end
The people cry for loved ones
Who got not much time on earth to spend
.
The Raven quotes his "Nevermore"
The Crow caws a trumpets revelry
The Rooster cries for his dearest Hen
Everyone, so lonely be
.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry this is the frist poem that I don't like the title of the poem should read THE ROOSTER THAT CROWS AT MIDNIGHT but the raven and the crow got in the way and I don't like the line the red wine is the blood of Jesus other then that the rest is ok I can do better thak you for ready peace and love to you xxoo