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The Tale of a Heart that wouldn't Heal

The Tale of a Heart that wouldn't Heal

                                             Once someone put a hole on my heart,
                                             I patched with cotton wool, but it didn’t last
                                             It was too soft, the tears ran right through it

                                             Once someone put a hole on my heart,
                                             I patched with wood, but the fire burned fiercely
                                             In the depth of its core and the patch became ashes

                                             Once someone put a hole on my heart,
                                             I patched with stone, and it was all right for a while,
                                             the heart got tired of missing out the melodies, one day grew cold

                                             Once someone put a hole on my heart,
                                             I patched with vengeance,
                                             and it got dissolved with the bitter taste of the acid

                                             Once someone put a hole on my heart,
                                             this time I patched with forgiveness
                                             but the hole didn’t close because the wound wouldn’t heal

                                             Once someone put a hole on my heart,
                                             I finally healed it with understanding and self-love.
                                             In my old age my heart still beats strong.
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Bernadete...

Great message...

Thank you for sharing...

lovely bird

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Neville

Now who's the cleva one eh' .. Neville 

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Bernie Martin

I definitely have a predilection for liking poems that have a repeated refrain. Just like yours does. It makes it almost more like song lyrics. Or is that just me? I like what you choose to patch that hole on your heart with. I have to admit that when you got down to forgiveness the patch might have worked. Interesting that the wound wouldn't heal. Interesting but also, given poetry I have written, entirely understandable. 
I do however like your final choice particularly self love. Understanding is interesting as well. As to how this poem speaks to me I would say understanding is as far as I can go for what happened. Forgiveness may just be a step too far. Sorry to have gone on - as is my way. 

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Marion

A bittersweet journey B because life is exactly that. Elegant and beautifully written as always my friend x

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