Poem -
THE TRAGEDY IN AMERICA
The tears are in my eyes
For the tragedy in America
If I close my eyes will itÂ
Change or will it be the same
some time this dream that I have
of the past I wish it would last
Its like a sword that stabbed
Us in are hearts and bled
on to the street all over are
feet, the tears are in my eyes
For the tragedy in America
If close my eyes I can see
America the way it wasÂ
Its like storm that never
Ends the rain that washedÂ
are dreams down the drain
And pain we are in can drive us
sane the tears are in my eyes
For the tragedy in America
It will never change it will
it stay the same
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Well written angel
Thank you Angel
Hello Greg...
Stay dreaming!
You haven't seen anything yet...
We'll get back to where it once was alright, just hope you're up for the task...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
thank you Sarrowsong
Wow G!!.....you did such a fine job of bringing out the tragic and hopelessness of this insight!!......your word choices are 'spot on'!!.......I can tell you put a LOT of thought & work into this piece.......ALL STARS!!......VERY well done my friend!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?
Thank you Tony yes I did take little
more time on this one but I think
i could have wrote it better
if I took more time, I should write
my poems down on paper frist
but I don't, I write outit  in my mind
and it stays there then when I think
to write out here
I may add to  it, some times it works
out thank you agin for reading it
means lot
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