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The View From My Window

The View From My Window

The view from my window,
it’s beautiful, in fact.
Oh, the view from my window is beautiful,
even though it’s cracked.
I look out at the world, 
so colorful and vivid.
But it’s also quite dull and grey,
so extremely livid.
But through my cracked window, 
I stare at a mirror.
I see a monster looking back at me,
no way I could see it clearer. 
This monster wears a smile,
but has a hidden frown.
The view of this monsters’ life,
is completely upside down.
And from this point of view,
you see a great sense of dread.
When the monster wakes up from sleep,
they can’t get out of bed.
They stay in bed for days on end, watching time pass,
they don’t want to move a single muscle, never going to class.
As a result of this, the monster knows,
that it will do no good.
So they retreat into their sweatshirt,
and put on the hood.
The monster doesn’t like it,
when people come near.
Because when they were just a child,
people would run away in fear.
Oh, this monster stares back at me,
its face filled with trepidation.
Then the monster goes on its way,
pondering its creation.
I see this monster everywhere,
day in and day out.
Every time I look at a reflection,
whenever I’m out and about.
I, too, am scared of this monster,
that lives deep down inside.
And I’ve tried to avoid it,
I’ve tried and tried and tried.
But never, oh never,
does this monster go away.
But the view from my window,
still remains so grey.

 

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Pratibha Savani

Hi. Wow this had me gripped from the beginning as the narrative was unfolding of the monster in the reflection, like all the demons in the closet. I love the way you used this metaphor to talk about inner struggles. It's a powerful poem and I loved it. 
I too have referenced to the mirror in my very early poems when talking about the self. 
Sssoo pinned! It's just too good!
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Bionic Elephant

Thank you! I'll have to check out some of your poems too!

-Bionic Elephant 

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Pratibha Savani

Welcome. I love it when I find a really good poem.
the mirror one I referred to is actually in my published book. You'll see the info I have posted it.
My paperback will be back on Amazon in a week.
I've not posted full poems recently......rather some quotes. But enjoy anything you read x

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Bionic Elephant

Oh that's cool. I hope your book goes well! I'm sure its fantastic!

-Bionic Elephant

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Yiyan Han

Sounds like in a nightmare or bad dream?

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Bionic Elephant

That’s an interesting perspective to have. I didn’t even realize that point of view until now! Thank you!

-Bionic Elephant

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