Handle With Care
The words “Handle With Care” were stamped on the box.
Yet you threw it anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were stamped on the letter.
Yet you tore it anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were stamped on the certificate.
Yet you crumpled it anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were carved into the wood.
Yet you burned it anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were ingrained into the vase.
Yet you smashed it anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were written on the mirror.
Yet you shattered it anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were written in the diary.
Yet you cracked the spine anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were plastered on the wall.
Yet you broke it down anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were engraved into the door.
Yet you took it off its hinges anyway.
The words “Handle With Care” were carved into my heart.
Yet you split it in half anyway.
You split it in half.
And now the words “Handle With Care” have faded away.
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Comments
Hello BIONIC ELEPHANT,
I REALLY like how you ran away with the repetition of the main phrase...you can tell it took some time and some creative thought to go into all those different ways to smash the "Handle With Care" foundation of the piece!!.....ALL STARS!!.....VERY creative my friend!!.....VERY compelling to the reader!!......The final lines were quite impactful to say the least!!.......Enjoyed!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
PS. sorry about the stars, it's not working properly (again)!!
Thank you Tony! Always a pleasure! Haha don’t worry about it it’s the thought that counts!
-Bionic Elephant
This was Wow. Cheers Bionic!Â
Cheers to you too!
-Bionic ElephantÂ
Agree with Tony on this one such a creative write! I enjoyed it heaps, very engaging, Kudos awesome named poet! XD, best wishes. TFOTSÂ
Thank you! Always nice to see your username here haha.
-Bionic ElephantÂ