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The Warmth of Boats?

The Warmth of Boats?

Just a pinprick now on the horizon
I watch as you slowly come near.
Your head bowed as though weighed with concrete,
your eyes show the pain and the fear.
Each step that you take brings you closer,
in spirit you’re still miles away.
Grotesquely your mouth twists in spasm
not forming the words they should say.
The buffeting wind sweeps you onwards,
but pride keeps you further apart.
Your body now creaky and wispy,
limbs fragile and weak like your heart .
The pain in your joints hot andΒ  searing,
those legs now unbending, once pliant.
Suffering in Β silence no longer endearing
we all know you’re now pain defiant.
For so long you’ve Β kept your love hidden,
cruel words said , but you never learned
that warmth comes from loving your kinfolk,
and not from the boats that you’ve burned…..
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StevieC

This is brilliant! a story told which is clear, descriptive,uses imaginative language, has a beginning, middle and end , and most importantly engages the reader and draws them into what the writer has experienced and sees- Good poetry!Β  xx

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lodigiana

Thank you so much StevieC .. actually I rather like this one myself..:) xx

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StevieC

Hi Lodi- congratulations on the nomination- well deserved ! xx

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lodigiana

Hi Lisa, thanks darling- I actually really liked the way this poem turned out which isn't always the case- really pleased you enjoyed it :)Β 
Ana xxΒ 

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