The Watchman’s Judgement

The watchman’s electronic eyes were taken into focus
on the man and woman sitting outside the café
engaged in animated conversation,
drinking coffee under a full white moon
The Watcher smiled at the moon,
As he observed the couple carefully
Their energy boiling, fragrant like a stew
She talked about the books she read
like Rumi: Bridge to the soul
The Scarlet Pimpernel
Fair Maiden
The Great Train Robbery
Then the Watchman saw the man’s thoughts
Clear as the bottom of a flowing crystal stream
the man waxed silent;
though she never ran short of words,
To the man, she became a verbose titillation
though he tried hard to censor his carnal ambitions
bind them to decency, his dark nature held sway,
the fury of passion was kindled in his blood,
ripening his inclination towards mischief
taking him down the forbidden path
where vice was an irresistible addictive crime
in the bedroom of his mind
breathing like an entity; sealing his condemnation
as the Watchman drew closer, imperceptible
in the twinkling of an electronic eye,
he was close enough to touch their rose peddle skin
taste the stirring in the man’s blood, and her sweet naiveté
as the fury of lust gained strength in the man
visions of entering her Mahogany places were embraced
sublime friction; became his only ambition
inside her velvet walls of paralyzing bliss,
freely he slowly entered, and moved with comfort
her pink fingernails, teasing, touching without contact
inspiring his momentum more rapid
their naked bodies covered with moisture,
drained and unashamed, placid
under the cover of night shades; cooling in the afterglow.
While she continued speaking, like a flowing, serenading flute;
innocent, unknowing
in the shadows, the Watchman waited for his opportunity
biting his nails with blood lust hunger
as if listening to a symphony; senses delighted by their thoughts
when suddenly his hand moved like a conductor’s baton
the sound of his blade unsheathing stilled the night
he was hell bent on the judgement, unmixed with mercy
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Not sure if I should wilt, or run away lol This is hot, okay sizzling hot. Your word choice and titillating imagery just made the tension unbearable. Loved it, so glad I stopped in. Got my stars all five... lol
Blessings Christopher,
Rebecca
I'm glad you stopped in as well, Rebecca, you are too generous with the comment, I'm just glad you found it an interesting read, now the subject matter admittedly is a wee bit tricky, but what I'm tackling here is the time we life in, of cameras on every street corner and judgement being made daily, hourly all around us based on our actions, associations...yes hyperbole is used 'The Watchman' but how far away is 'technology' from reading thoughts and making judgement? I saw a documentary on cyber intelligence and certain 'techniques' now in use to prevent crime before it happens, these are scary times we live in, much scarier than vampires....some may not 'get' this poem, but I will put myself to sleep if I don't try writing about 'different' subjects, cheers, Rebecca, love your comments, thanks
damn Christopher this is so good!
PoetessDarkly, thanks, so glad you connected with it, cheers poet
hey, sis, the Watchman loves his job, wouldn't you? lol....of cause 'the Watchman' is a metaphor for those gathering information on ordinary citizens, and making life changing judgement all the time, for the most part, in secret...cyber security or the 'electronic eye' spoken of in the first line is extremely prevalent in the times we live in, and Chris watches a LOT of documentaries, so there...so we add a little creative liberty and Shazam! ramma damma ding dong, I present to you a poem about the computer age we live in, be well...and you better keep 'good' thoughts in your head, just to be safe, lol...have great evening my sister, hugs
hey ya Christopher you can call me Lisa
Hi chris what a mesmorizing read loved the imagery
Two words titalting read loved it m8
I have wrote a few new ones be grateful if you cast an eye
Cheers jeff
thanks for checking in, and for giving me the heads up on your new stuff as well, cheers (will do)
Wow Chris love a piece that can take me where you are and I can see everything as clear as it was in your thoughts.. awesome..