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The Wolf

The Wolf

Penetrating pinpricks, like icy glowing embers,blaze a trail through the stygian night.
Laser straight,defying compromise.
Prey spotted, paralysed with primeval fear,
fight or flight decisions considering.
This forty thousand year old dog, now master of his domain,
has  no thoughts  of retreat,
only 
warm,
fresh, 
meat.
Alpha male stands proud,but resolute, knowing the pack awaits his gesture.
Nostrils flare,taking in the scent also, of the damp,
urine soaked bracken,
the isolated, pungent sign post of a feast.
Razor talons claw slowly, but relentlessly,
caressing and releasing  the earth.....
Patiently....
waiting,
but,
salivating. 
The standoff now stretching into hypnotic oneupmanship....
Fear has a pungency that excites.. 
Knowing his job is almost completed,the smirking lips languidly curl, slowly and  malevolently, 
revealing ivory incisors.
The soft nape hair now bristling and the gentle rhythmic breathing, transformed into a low, satisfied,growl.
Becoming deeper now and louder, vibrating through his hungry lean body...
Lithe limbs fiercely spring into life, Beta, Delta and Omega,
like a multi limbed body.... in unison strike.
The kill, 
swift and
merciless,
is  over.

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StevieC

This is an outstanding piece of literary excellence! Descriptive, engrossing, creating the perfect imagery -  imagining the wolf pack, stalking ,waiting and killing their prey...If this isnt nominated then I will eat my hat...everyone needs to read this Lodi..it’s masterful!

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lodigiana

That's such a wonderful thing to say!- thank you! always good to get such positive feedback when sometimes you  have work so hard to produce an acceptable piece- really, really appreciate it! xxx

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Keith Fitzsimons

Agree with Steve it is masterful! Should be nominated but they often ignore great poems!

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lodigiana

Thank you so much Keith -that's so nice of you to say so, and really appreciated!  xxx
Lodigiana

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

They have a way of showing how proud they are when He and His Mate create a Family...

Wolves are the Best of Us...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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lodigiana

Hi Sparrowsong, I was about 6 years old  when I first saw a wolf up close,in a park in Europe, caged and trapped with people crowded round and my heart absolutely broke for this wonderful creature on his own, pacing up and down....they are magnificient creatures and I wanted to write something as an homage to the Wolf..Thank you so much for your comments- really appreciate it hun! Xxx
Lodigiana

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