Poem -
Then, and Now
So I guess we've run out of time,
Your longing face refuses to look,
Back into my eyes,
Reaching out into the darkness,
Lost in space and time,
Why are your hands are so hard to find,
I'm sitting alone,
On the doorsteps too your home,
But I know you haven't been here in such a long time,
Your tears still petrified in my mind,
I just wanted to say I've put the empty bottle,
Down for the last time,
I know you've gone away,
But I still can't get you off my mind,
Maybe these words will be carried far away,
And reach your sweet ears,
So you know I live in guilt everyday,
For making you cry that day
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Comments
Beautiful sorrow xoxo
Thank you:)
I agree with Nardine. This is beautiful and heartbreakingĀ at the same time. 5*s
Val ā„ļø
Hi Gordon,
Sad and guilt stimulating verse, my applause, i love the below lines
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
In my humble opinion friend.........you have shared your heart with us all..........quite beautifully.........had to feel good to get ALL that down in words!!..........well conceived and beautifully delivered.........great rhythm and timing in this write.........an excellent choice for the photo..........well done brotherĀ Ā Ā Ā and..........WELCOME to Cosmo!!.......... 5*s................love and rockets...........T xx
Quality work, Gordon...poem comes alive, superb tone and the implied story is fascination as well, this is a really good read, liked what you did here....cheers
Thank you for the support!