Then I'll be free

I'm a picture of piety , over run by pain
Self doubt pulls stings and controls my brain ,Will I ever win or just remain the same
Hideing behind shadows cast off by shame .
What still stands of my body , just wreck I've become
Scars like marks of ageing , in one so young , the taste of bitterness still wrapped around my tongue.
I admit I put up walls , just to tear them down .
I admit I sometimes think I deserve to feel this down
I know I shouldn't feel this way , I hope one day I'll be
Happy within my self ... Then I will be free .

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This is a well written piece Marc, keep your head up man one day I believe sooner than later you will be free. Allstars from me. enjoyed.
Thankyou :) your so kind
Well written Marc!!.........there is a very compelling melancholy to this..........I felt like I was privy to your diary...........but your internal struggle is a Very healthy bit of self expression..........well done my friend.........some excellent phrasing here!!..............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
Cheers :) glad to see you enjoyed it thankyou so much :)