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these tears

These tears they shed a thousands words. My heart aches. Oh, how much it hurts. You were here but not for long. Now I feel as though i I don't belong . You were my strength when I was weak. Now it's hard to even speak. Words I can no longer say. My world is upside down. It's turning gray. I no longer will i laugh. No longer will i smile. My happiness left when you were ripped away. My world went to gray. Now I'm slowly fading away.   

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Tony Taylor

Hey KATIE!!....... this is depressing as hell!!........ mission accomplished right?......... well I hope you're writing this kinda stuff to find that epiphany or release you're looking for....... this piece is filled with some excellent phrasing....... thereby creating memorable imagery in the minds eye of your reader..... and for me, personally, I found it t be striking right at the heart of the beauty in anger......... delivered with strong rhythm and timing......... you have a gift for writing........ can't wait to read your stuff as you get better and better........ALL STARS!!........ well done...... and WELCOME to COSMO!!......... LOVE and ROCKETS!!...:..T xo.   ?

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Christopher Correia

simple, pretty poetry, Katie, sad but sweet, with good rhymes and a solid beat, cheers D

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