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These Waves of Loss

Sea winds whipping
Against my heart
The  waves crashing
My hopes apart
Into a deep abyss of  loss
I am scattered
To the ocean of pain
Tears run hot and salty down my face 
I am too far gone to care
Standing on the cliffs of Scotland
Hoping a light would stop me 
I am diving down
To my destiny
The future born
From my past
Engulfed with waves and  dashed on rocks
I now rise beyond this grief
To the blissful halls of night

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GREG TUCKER THE...

What a deep but beautiful reflection to life.  Something we all feel at one time or another

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Raeleen Linde

Thank you for your reading and comment.  Pain can be beautiful in a devastating way.
Rae

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Jim "The Lad" ....

really cool write!" The waves crashing my hopes apart"..............................Jim

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Raeleen Linde

Thank you for your comment.  Sometimes
it felt that way.  
Rae

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Syd

Very well written Raeleen, some really good vivid descriptions in there.

Enjoyed  - Syd 

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