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THEY WERE YOUNG CHILDREN!

THEY WERE YOUNG CHILDREN!

They were young children! just young children!
out enjoying a magical musical night
At Manchester arena, no thoughts 
that they would have to flee for their lives

Twenty two were killed fifty nine injured
Great Britain is sad 
How can we eradicate these terrorists
these evil ones, gone mad?

There is anger here sorrow, disbelief,
and people grieving in pain
I have to reiterate they were young children!
please tell me what was their they gain? 

I feel  anger but I wont spout hate
I won`t give terrorists the limelight they seek
My thoughts and prayers are only with those young 
children,to the ones who have died,May they rest in peace....

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Charlotte

so so soooooooooooo sad that this has to happen in this world . such awful evil people out there.

i heard it this morning . its awful

well done for puttin this into writing

very well said ...

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Charlotte Thank you for your  kind comments 
a very sad day for Great Britain Today 
Best wishes Debs 

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pink daisy

hello. yes it is so sad. lovely touching poem but very sad

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Adele Yes a very sad day. 
Thank you for your kind comments 
Best wishes Debs 

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Greg Etsell

It is so sad that happen and will not stop intill world leaders do something it will just keep happing

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Greg Yes very sad, little innocent children  losing their lives
the youngest named today was just 8 
I see all around the world, world leaders are pledging to step 
up the war on terrorism. By the grace of God lets hope we can 
defeat this evil 
Thank you for your comments always appreciated 
Best wishes Debs 

 

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Rose Sho

My heart is broken...It's inhuman...why kill innocent children...What was there crime...It's disgusting...My heart goes to the bereaved families...and the children who lost their lives...Don't know where this world is heading to...Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Sweet Rose Thank you for your heartfelt comments 
I don t understand either To think they planned to do this 
to these innocent children, I agree with you  Inhuman 
Lots of love Debs 

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Cleo Tomi Ola

Hi Debs, that's so sad, the world is really becoming an ugly place. Pray for peace and love to reign on earth. Warm regards.

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Cleo I agree this world is becoming a an ugly place 
We can only hope and pray together for peace, to end 
these tragedies 
Warmest wishes to you 
Debs 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

I heard this on the news yesterday...

I had been doing some research on the different books and religions...

We aren't fighting evil...

It's not evil people...

They want us to write about them and they want to make it on the news...

They are going by the teachings of what they are exposed to..

They are believing in a false prophet and that's a much more difficult fight then if we just see them as terrorists...

That's the message they're sending to the world...

We can clearly see when this all began just by doing research and they have been allowed to grow and become powerful...

People don"t want us to get involved...

What they don't understand is involves all of us...

It's sad and tragic, but it's no surprise...

The surprise is when and where they attack...

Not that it happens, because we know they're out there...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sis Sparrowsong I  Agree these people want notoriety
they spread hate they want us to hate,
they are extremists of their faith,who cause
misery and pain, to kill and hurt young children is 
abhorrent,we do know their out there,we have 
to find a way to overcome their evil ways 
 the world has to stand together against them 
Thank you for your comments always appreciated 
Hugs Debs    

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Leah Yodico

So appalling,cowardly attacks on innocent children.## But the people will never be defeated by this evil attack!!  Love is always stronger than hate!!  Let's pray to all the victims, families, and friends.  

Thanks for sharing Deb. 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Leah I agree they are cowards to do this to innocent children
I  can not imagine what their families are going through 
I pray for them too
Thank you for you comments always appreciated 
Hugs Debs 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorris Thank you for your comments
always appreciated
Best wishes Debs 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Debs,

.

Let me be your hate spout

For these monsters who took young lives

Let me be their executioner

To behead them with sharp knives

.

You can represent me

Giving prayers to all they slew

But it's time to end their tyranny

And make them all dead too

.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry So sorry for the late reply 
Thank you for your poem 
it is definately time to end their tyranny 
Love n hugs Debs xox

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