THEY'RE WITH YOU

Theyâre with you; can you feel them
In the night time; there they lie
These visions that elude you
But silently pass by
They appear without a reason
Disappear; canât focus on
A feeling that youâre being watched
You turn but then theyâre gone
Itâs a presence that you feel
Foreboding? Donât think so
More a sense of watching
Feeling that they know
Kind of like an angel
But not peaceful, not sure why
Wanting you to know theyâre there
Donât speak; donât even try
The silence it is haunting
And the feeling is intense
Just for one split second
Then you question your sixth sense
Have you ever felt that moment
On your own within a room
Doing something random
Then you feel a presence loom
Itâs weird; but then you turn
What the hell is wrong with you?
Your mind is going loopy
What did all that good living do?
Must have pickled all your brain cells
Youâre tired; need your sleep
Even those within religion
Their faith would take some leap
So you carry on regardless
Forget all your stupid thoughts
Life continues normally
âTil once again you feel that force
Itâs strange and most disturbing
Could have sworn it was the cat
But the cat is in the other room
Playing on the mat
So you keep it to yourself
Make no mention of this âthingâ
Bury in your crazy mind
Out; donât ever bring
But theyâre with you; and you know that
In the night time; where they lie
These visions donât elude you
Never pass you by
Donât appear without a reason
Theyâre there when you need peace
Theyâre always out there watching you
Their souls will never cease
Cos theyâre kind of like an angel
But not restful, this is true
They want you to have missed them
Theyâre your loved ones who miss you ........
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Excellent write. Master quality.
Thank you very much Michael, much appreciated :)
Thanks Susan, what a lovely comment, and you picked up on a lot of things that I hadn't even thought of. Â For me it was about, how sometimes you can be at home and you feel a presence in some way but no one is there, or a notion of someone passing by but you're alone. Â The end was to suggest that those watching constantly, that cannot rest, are the loved ones you have known in your life that stay around you.
Appreciate you reading and taking the time! Thanks Susan :)
Gripping stuff Miss Darkness, another 5*s from me X:)
Lol! I like that name I could get quite used to that ha ha, thanks for the stars:)x
really good stuff
Cheers Keith :)
great piece rachel ,you just described my life in this house lol  creepy yet not fearful .  great job!  tina x
Thanks Tina, was more about the loved ones that die and come back to watch over you LOL, but I know what you mean ha ha. Â Thanks for your kind vote! :)
Rachel Gardiner,
Congrats on your winning nomination.
Regards
Williamsji Maveli
Thanks, much appreciated Williamsji Maveli :)
Feeling this babes all the way up my spine...tingling...you just shine big 5'er x
Glad that it had the desired effect lol!! Â Thanks for reading Carey your kind comments are always appreciated :)
brilliant rachel voted faved and nomed great write congrats x
Cheers Susan, your comments are always appreciated, thanks hun :)
Thanks Iman, your kind comments are very much appreciated :)