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THINKING OF YOU

My heart was beating
My mind was fully aware
My body felt, my minded recorded
But where were you, while I was there
Something is terribly wrong
Where have you gone, while I'm here
You only needed a warm body
Without a heart and soul, I fear
Where have you gone, my love
Why didn't you take me too
While you went away inside your mind
I was here, thinking of you

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Tony Taylor

Wow GAYLE!!....the loneliness, confusion, and longing is expressed beautifully here....with STELLAR poetic phrasing.....the melancholy is apparent and certainly made me feel the intent of your mighty pen!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......excellent poetry........VERY sad subject matter....I pray this is a fiction....but somehow I know it is not!!......stay strong dear poet sister!!.......for this too shall pass!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Gayle McMillan

Thank you Tony, for responding to such a sad subject matter! Your words of encouragement are much appreciated! It's wonderful to hear from you!

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