This Dream...
This dream is no longer mine. Forsaken by time. A lost & forgotten thought, of paths that we sought. Ill fated with time. No this dream is no longer mine.
Isn’t it strange. How life can rearrange, our hopes and wants, our youthful schemes. Converting them into lost or forgotten dreams. All of the things we wanted to do, isn’t time strange.Â
As our body begins to age. The mind fells trapped. Worn and battered by the passing of time, which has converted our dreams into tears & our thoughts into rage, as our youthful strength is lost to the wisdom of age...
This dream is no longer mine. Looked past in passing time. A lost & forgotten thought of paths that we sought. Becoming ill fated with time. No, no this dream is no longer mine.
This dream is no longer mine. Lost in time. A long lost forgotten thought, of paths that was sought. Being ill fated with time, no, No this dream is no longer mine.Â
The mind grows ever stronger, constantly learning. As the body begins to fail, continually yearning. We hand off the past. Down to our children, we cast, all of our hopes, dreams and learnings. Ever hopeful and constantly yearning...
This dream is no longer mine. Erased with time. A long lost passing thought, of paths that we sought. Dreams ill fated by time. NO, this dream is no longer mine, no no No this dream is no longer mine...
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We are all on a Journey Pat! And things change and alter as life continues. This message is so brilliantly conveyed through this write. Pinned. Best Wishes to you. The Fish of the Sea.
Thank you my biggest(only) fan... I now have a new favorite pen of mine. Â The love you give my pens makes me want to move from a writer and into an author...
im glad you enjoyed the read.Â
much loveÂ
p@trick €ppersonÂ
Awww glad I made you feel this way, heaps of others feel love your work too though, I reckon hundreds just sit here and read without showing it... yeah I see you back there XD Fab again. Best wishes to you. The Fish of the Sea.
Did you post the canvas one. I’m wanting to read your poetic version of this topic.. Â
much love and respect.Â
p@trick €ppersonÂ
Not yet Pat! Like I said, working progress, and 1 poem daily is my limit, keeps me productive on the rest of my day! But thanks for the follow-up. Perhaps tomorrow, Aus time that is~ Best wishes to you. The Fish of the Sea.
It seems these days I have more time than anything else. I haven’t been able to work now going on seven years( due to multiple disc damaged in my neck and lower back with nerve damage to arms and legs)
so I spend my days around my tiny home with my shar pei and my penned words
i read knowledge as much as I can but get distracted from my reading as each read pushes me into writing.Â
thank you again and looking forward to reading it when it’s finishedÂ
much love and respectÂ
p@trick €ppersonÂ
p.s.
in NEED of a koala cub🤪
Wow, that's eye-opening to me such a price you have given for your country, truly we should be giving respect to you! I hope you find some relief in art and poetry! Best wishes to you.
Also funny you should mention had a Koala cub and mother in the backyard trees the other day... not sure I can ship him over right now XD.Â
It would be a pet teddy bear!!!!!
p@t
haha! Actually due to the bush fires animal rescue might a few "just lying around" XD
I now think of posterity. I think of my past and future family that I cherish more and more! I believe that I will see them again and want to leave my best legacy. That is what this poem draws me to again. Enjoyed! your poet friend, Jim
Thank you so much sir for the insightful response to my penned words. Such comments as these always push me to do more and more.Â
much love
p@trick €ppersonÂ
We are all mates here,I would answer To Jim, I have a hard time with sir. I hope to just be a friend. enjoy your poems.your poet friend ,Jim. I call FOTS sir, for fun!
XD I answer to anything to be honest just not Ms! Lol.
I got you beat fish! I'll even answer to that, it might not be as kind, lol! I am so thankful for your service Patrick ,I should be calling you sir. Welcome home and if I may speak for the Cosmo group, Welcome to the Cosmo!
5* comment to you Jim
Thank you Jim both for thanking me for my service and for enjoying my pens.Â
love and respectÂ
p@trick €ppersonÂ
It’s my time in the Marine Corps, sir madam drilled into me. But I’ll try to remember to scale that down in here... thank you both again for the love. Â
Sir EPPERSON,
INTERESTING!!......I am sending you a PM!!....talk soon.....Peace.......T xo : )
Looking forward to it and thank you for the love shown for my penned wordsÂ
much love and respectÂ
p@trick €ppersonÂ
A well written poem that brings a lot of emotion to the reader. In this fast moving, greedy world (where kindness is a virtue many lack) our dreams are very often all we have to keep us happy enough to plod on through the days. And so when I read that your dreams were no longer yours, I felt so sad. A bereavement kind of sad. And that is the emotion that struck me while reading this. Great poem, and a fab picture too x
Thank you for reading my poetry and for leaving comments of how the pen emotionally struck you.  I feel as though if any written work should touch every reader’s emotion for it to become a decent pen....
much love and appreciationÂ
p@t
Oh, it's a very decent pen! Thank you for sharing it with us x
The pleasure of the pen is in reading the thoughts of its readers after. So the pleasure is mine. Â Thanks again. Â
p@t