I had a small chuckle with this ditty, I seriously I am not laughing at the misery only that it represents almost everyone's perspective well done Neville
Aw Nev, don't take it the wrong way its a great write its just the last unexpected line that made me giggle...so raw..and great...you're great...you're poetry is exceptionally great ...I love your work but that last line did make me giggle...and I actually thankyou for that...friends?? 😟😊❤️
Like I said, it wasn’t not meant to or meant to, I get a kick out of the different ways folk read into, interpret and make guestumations about my scribbles .. so no worries or need for explanations, and yes of course we are friends my very good un xx
Shit likes to happen! usually one thing after another and obviously unexpectedly or when you're stuck!!
You capture this quite perfectly with your words.
lorna x
Nev, oubliette.
Ooh là là!
Well that is indeed a word this reader hasn't heard in quite some time.
Your last line creased me, for I didn't see it coming.
Then a reality check of the cold light of day kicked in and thought this could be a snippet from the last diary page of Guy Fawkes.
And look what happened to poor bugger.
Thanks Nev and you never disappoint :)
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I had a small chuckle with this ditty, I seriously I am not laughing at the misery only that it represents almost everyone's perspective well done Neville
You read me so well .. thanks :)
Made me laugh Nev..sorry...was it supposed to??...tough😆... and thanks for the smile 😊💕
.. It wasn't not meant to .. thanks Marion x
Aw Nev, don't take it the wrong way its a great write its just the last unexpected line that made me giggle...so raw..and great...you're great...you're poetry is exceptionally great ...I love your work but that last line did make me giggle...and I actually thankyou for that...friends?? 😟😊❤️
Like I said, it wasn’t not meant to or meant to, I get a kick out of the different ways folk read into, interpret and make guestumations about my scribbles .. so no worries or need for explanations, and yes of course we are friends my very good un xx
Hi Neville,
Shit likes to happen! usually one thing after another and obviously unexpectedly or when you're stuck!!
You capture this quite perfectly with your words.
lorna x
You are way too kind my friend .. Thanks for stopping by x
Oooh...I find this sad. Like a sort of hopeless sad x
it is what it is and you aint far off target Tina .. but then that was way back .. thank you for listening x
Nev, oubliette.
Ooh là là!
Well that is indeed a word this reader hasn't heard in quite some time.
Your last line creased me, for I didn't see it coming.
Then a reality check of the cold light of day kicked in and thought this could be a snippet from the last diary page of Guy Fawkes.
And look what happened to poor bugger.
Thanks Nev and you never disappoint :)
Cheers Shaun .. I suppose it was the medieval equivalent of todays naughty step :)