Poem -
This Smell
The grey clouds fill the room,
Suffocating anyone who breathes through their nostrils.
Toxic to my fragile lungs,
A cough, then another.
A cloth tries to block the stench,
But a furious voice echoes through the walls.
Clenched fists,
Preparing for an uproar.
Teeth grit tightly.
Gwen.P
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This line just made me feel...something weird...that I can't quite explain...NICE!
Hmmmmm... Very interesting, I hope its a good weird? :)
This is how I feel when anyone smokes weed around me.
See, I'm allergic to THC, the drug in marijuana.
It makes me deathly ill just being around the smoke.
Coconut is another. If I eat anything or use any bath product that has coconut or coconut oil in it, my throat swells shut and I can't breathe. I break out in an angry red rash...it's horrible!
These were my thoughts after reading your poem.
Well penned, Gwen.
~Dean Kuch ? ?
Thank you very much Dean Kuch :)
Anytime, Gwen. :)