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Those that comment.

(Thank you)

Those that comment.

I was lost in the waters
There was a pain in my heart.
Confidence set in mortar,
Breaking from the start.

To those who support me,
I thank you most kindly.
To those who just comment
Your words just stop me dead.

For your 5 minute stops,
Give me 24 hours of joy.
A click of a button,
Is more than just somthing.

So I thank you most kindly,
I thank you I say,
For your words of support.
Lift up this Fishes day.

Thank you.

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Being Me

Oh, so very well expressed!  It is a joy to be able to comment nicely about someone's poem but on the other side of the coin I know exactly how it feels to be lost in a thick cloud of a dark day only to be lifted from it by a thoughtful comment from someone who has read a poem you posted. A few words and your dark day becomes so much brighter. If only more people took a few moments out of their time to offer support to a fellow poet.

Your words in this poem are humbling to read and awesome x

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The fish of the sea

Thanks Me! To be honest, you were one of my main inspirations to write this poem, I definitely will be more active in commenting in the future, Thanks again for your support, isn`t this what the cosmos is all about? Keep in there. A fellow poet. The Fish of the Sea

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Syd

Very uplifting.

Nice poem - Syd 

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The fish of the sea

Thanks Syd, support from you lifts up this Fishes day! Enjoy your read. The Fish of the Sea.

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Marion

Ah very nice write Mr Fish....yes I agree, what's the point of a poetry site if we all can't be encouraging and supportive and offer feedback for each other...thanks for sharing your thoughts ??

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The fish of the sea

Thanks Marion. You were one of those who really lifted me up when you first commented on Tremmors a while back. Thanks for your support. The Fish of the Sea.

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Marion

You're welcome, I know how I felt when I got my first comment ...( Like this ...???) lol...?

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