Poem -
Those that comment.
(Thank you)
I was lost in the waters
There was a pain in my heart.
Confidence set in mortar,
Breaking from the start.
To those who support me,
I thank you most kindly.
To those who just comment
Your words just stop me dead.
For your 5 minute stops,
Give me 24 hours of joy.
A click of a button,
Is more than just somthing.
So I thank you most kindly,
I thank you I say,
For your words of support.
Lift up this Fishes day.
Thank you.
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Oh, so very well expressed! It is a joy to be able to comment nicely about someone's poem but on the other side of the coin I know exactly how it feels to be lost in a thick cloud of a dark day only to be lifted from it by a thoughtful comment from someone who has read a poem you posted. A few words and your dark day becomes so much brighter. If only more people took a few moments out of their time to offer support to a fellow poet.
Your words in this poem are humbling to read and awesome x
Thanks Me! To be honest, you were one of my main inspirations to write this poem, I definitely will be more active in commenting in the future, Thanks again for your support, isn`t this what the cosmos is all about? Keep in there. A fellow poet. The Fish of the Sea
Very uplifting.
Nice poem - Syd
Thanks Syd, support from you lifts up this Fishes day! Enjoy your read. The Fish of the Sea.
Ah very nice write Mr Fish....yes I agree, what's the point of a poetry site if we all can't be encouraging and supportive and offer feedback for each other...thanks for sharing your thoughts ??
Thanks Marion. You were one of those who really lifted me up when you first commented on Tremmors a while back. Thanks for your support. The Fish of the Sea.
You're welcome, I know how I felt when I got my first comment ...( Like this ...???) lol...?