Poem - 15 March 2016, 20:27

Thousand Miles To Stare(Acrostic)

Devon La Porte

Gaging mind, aware of surroundings

Either here, somewhere trapped over there

Trouble is, deciphering reality;

Opt to bare a psycho grin, loading arms

Under fire thoughts,

This is death, within a stare.

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Verse Tragedy Freestyle

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Bradford15 March 2016, 21:02

Hey Devon very short but each line is full of power and conviction. A great write. Cheers rock

Devon La Porte15 March 2016, 21:06

Hello Rock, this has been a problem amongst many soldiers and a few people I've know. There are solutions or ways they can be helped. Cheers bud.

Bradford15 March 2016, 21:12

Hey Devon my dad has done one year in Vietnam and he never talks about it but he handles by always staying busy I do believe. Some have a hard time coping after a war and others find a way to help and relief the stress some way some how . Cheers rock

mark thomas16 March 2016, 05:20

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Devon La Porte16 March 2016, 05:31

Hey Mark, seen a special on PTSD yesterday and how some veterans are using Marijuana to cope with this disorder and its actually helping compared to all the prescribed medications from the government. I have another write that pairs with this that im working on.