Threads Of Life
Again, this is another one that I had stuck in my head for months, so I wrote it down. I'm not too pleased with it, but I...
In this tapestry that we call life
we're but a single thread
So when one dies we mustn't let
too many tears be shed
For all things have a certain flow
whether slow or fast
We're intertwined with future times
and time already past
Every person on this earth
impacts each others lives
For you to truly comprehend
look through another's eyes
Then maybe you will finally see
we're all in this together
If we try to help each other out
this world just might get better
Instead of violence show some love
and see what that might bring
For peace and joy go hand in hand
overcoming anything
If we teach the children of this world
that hate is not the way
Then we must start that lesson now
so peace can reign someday
For a world where all can finish first
and no one left behind
While the true at heart can only be
the future of mankind
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Hi Pure Evil,
That pen name doesn't fit your writing by the way because you are clearly not pure evil. Great write and great rhymes...I too am still learning after years (it says in your profile that you know little about poetry...I disagree)
I started with simple rhymes, that B, D rhyme sequence is something I discovered on my own but is quite widely used.
I love poems that rhyme really well and convey a great message. You kind of remind me of my own writing style from three or four years ago.
Apologies for my rant on one of your other poems. Cosmofunnel is really a good place to start writing, it's a shame it isn't quite what it was a year or so ago.
- Syd
Thank you Syd for that comment, I really apprciate it. As for the pen name... I've had it for so long, I wouldn't know how to act with any other name lol. But trust me lol, I earned this name. As for my knowledge of poetry, I couldn't tell you the difference between two styles to save my life lol. I just write what rhymes lol. And I agree, this site isn't even close to a year ago.... I've been a member of this site for quite awhile but quit coming on when no one gave feedback. And no need to apologize for the former rant, I had the same thoughts. Again, thank you Syd, every comment is very much appreciated.
I so agree with what you have written 405, we are all interlinked and remain interlinked after death( personal beliefs and not religious) ...can't help missing people though. I agree with you and Syd...it's a depressing site when everybody just posts and doesn't give feedback...it's lonely depressing and pointless. I stop coming on here periodically also but I can't stop writing!! My hand betrays my intentions..lol...hugs ?
Lol, I agree Marion, I haven't been able to to stop the writing part either. Thank you for the comment, as always, I appreciate it.
So true love.
Thank you Liliana for your comment, I really appreciate it