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Left Behind

It seems that lately I'm writing poems that make little to no sense to me...but here is another one lol

I live my life a product,
of a dream I've left behind
I breathe the air of constant pain,
still harbored in my mind

All dreams consist of bitter hate,
consumed by memories
That emerge as chaos veiled in rage,
while chained to misery

These echoes ring inside my head,
but silence haunts my soul
With all this anger in my heart,
I slowly lose control

While torment reigns I struggle through,
to end this poisoned hold
But peace has turned her back on me,
and left me in the cold

Now, all that stands within my reach,
are lonliness and time
Though I lived my life a product,
of the dreams I left behind
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Okay! you've got me going in circles! but sometimes a merry go round can be merry! putttt on the brakkkes I'm dizzy! lol! I think I got it, thanks for sharing, I love it!.......................Jim

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Pure405Evil

Lol....please explain it to me, cause I have no clue lol.
Thanks for the comment and your time to read it

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Marion

I get it...or I get what I want from it...regret, angst, despair...and yearning, for all that is lost, destroyed or never was...hugs 💕

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Pure405Evil

Thank you Marion for the comment, and I think you may have hit the nail on the head with your analysis lol. After thought and a reread, I believe you got it lol

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Pure405Evil

Thank you Greg for your time and your comment, both are always appreciated

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lodigiana

I understand just where you are coming from my friend...makes absolute sense..so well written and wonderfully flowing but with a haunting, melacholy that grabs the reader and remains with them. Thank you for sharing this difficult piece with us.  Lodigiana x

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Pure405Evil

Thank you Lodigiana, I apologize for the extremely late reply.....life sometimes rears its ugly head lol and you have to deal with it.
But I certainly appreciate your time to read this and your comment, thank you.

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The fish of the sea

Pure! What a fantastic and deeply powerful read. I'm so sorry I missed it my friend. I had a dark spot too, comparing my thoughts and feelings to white noise, completely overbeared... Man oh man I wish you come back to Cosmos soon. Your such a great writer, expressing your feelings through your poetry. Hope you step well my friend, Max

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