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THREADS OF TIME

THREADS OF TIME

                                             In your wrinkles- I see a River                            
                                               Ever changing ever flowing
                                                 Turbulent sometimes
                                              Mostly placid and growing
                                      
                                              In your wrinkles- I see a Road
                                            Well- travelled and well worn
                                        Sometimes light other times shadow
                                          A path of gravel, silk, and thorn
                                                      
                                              In your wrinkles-I see Words
                                            Like a warm breeze at night    
                                          Brushing soft, touching gently
                                               A gift on a beam of light

                                               In your wrinkles- I see the Silence
                                                Of words not said and done
                                          Your heart wrote a thousand lines
                                             When your fingers wrote none

                                                In your wrinkles- I see Tears
                                                       Mighty drops of grey
                                                    Shed in the dark nights
                                           Washed away by the good days

                                              In your wrinkles- I see Peace
                                                       Grateful for the days
                                                      A chest full of treasures-
                                                  The memories of yesterday                 

                                               In your wrinkles- I see some Pages
                                                     Still waiting for the ink
                                             Another story to tell, another line to fill
                                            One more life to touch- kindness, if you will
   
                                            In your wrinkles- I see the Willow
                                              A messenger of faith and hope
                                             Bowing low in morning prayer
                                            Against the winds trying to cope
                                                     
                                              In your wrinkles- I see Love
                                              Not seeking, but given away   
                                             Love so profound and godly
                                                Irradiating sunshine ray
                                        
                                               In your wrinkles- I see Wisdom
                                                 Too humble to proclaim
                                           The hands touching the candle
                                             Guarding the precious flame
 
                                               In your wrinkles- I see Music
                                              The notes in eternal flight
                                              Leading a life worth lived
                                            With the courage of a Knight

                                               In your wrinkles- I see no Wrinkles
                                                    Only beauty hidden away
                                           As your wrinkles are threads of time
                                                     Accepting with grace.                                                                                                         

                                              
 

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Bernie Martin

I wasn't quite sure where your title would fit in to this poem but the end verse finishes the poem superbly when wrinkles are no longer seen, only threads of time. 
I really like what you choose to see in the wrinkles because it doesn't follow the expected path. I love the road as a path of gravel, silk and thorn. 3 really well chosen nouns which are very suggestive of the road itself. And of course, as a writer, how could I not be drawn to the wrinkles as empty pages awaiting the writer's touch. But for me it's the verse on love that stands out, in particular "not seeking but given away." That is a beautiful expression of unconditional love. 

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Bernadete van d...

Thank you very much dear Bernie! I cannot help but just love the way you
perceive poems, perceive things. Life is pure poetry. Good or tragic. I am
honoured you take time for my poems. Cheers!

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Marion

I love how you've used 'wrinkles' in your write Bernadete because they seem to be a thing of the past these days and those who don't conform to botox and fillers are seen as an oddity rather than the norm. Old age was once a thing respected for all the reasons you have written about so beautifully ..alas now it is frowned on. Lovely write x

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Shaun Cronick

Excellent poem throughout Bernadete with its captivating theme.
 So good to see and wish all poems were this original and engaging and beautifully written.
Full honours bestowed and richly deserved and I hope all is well with you.

 

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Bernadete van d...

Mr Cronick, coming from you this is a big compliment. I am humbled by your comment and I thank you for taking the time to read my writings. Nice to meet you Shaun!
 

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Shaun Cronick

Just Shaun will suffice and darn it, I forgot to say welcome to Cosmo Bernadete.
My bad.
So, welcome to Cosmo Bernadete!!
And nice to meet and read you!!

Will read more tomorrow and catch up and looking forward to doing so.
All the best and all good things to you, your imagination and your poetry pen :)

 

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Neville

An exceptionally good poem of epic proportion .. I take my hat off to both you and your pen .. Neville 

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