THREADS OF TIME
In your wrinkles- I see a River
Ever changing ever flowing
Turbulent sometimes
Mostly placid and growing
In your wrinkles- I see a Road
Well- travelled and well worn
Sometimes light other times shadow
A path of gravel, silk, and thorn
In your wrinkles-I see Words
Like a warm breeze at night
Brushing soft, touching gently
A gift on a beam of light
In your wrinkles- I see the Silence
Of words not said and done
Your heart wrote a thousand lines
When your fingers wrote none
In your wrinkles- I see Tears
Mighty drops of grey
Shed in the dark nights
Washed away by the good days
In your wrinkles- I see Peace
Grateful for the days
A chest full of treasures-
The memories of yesterday
In your wrinkles- I see some Pages
Still waiting for the ink
Another story to tell, another line to fill
One more life to touch- kindness, if you will
In your wrinkles- I see the Willow
A messenger of faith and hope
Bowing low in morning prayer
Against the winds trying to cope
In your wrinkles- I see Love
Not seeking, but given away
Love so profound and godly
Irradiating sunshine ray
In your wrinkles- I see Wisdom
Too humble to proclaim
The hands touching the candle
Guarding the precious flame
In your wrinkles- I see Music
The notes in eternal flight
Leading a life worth lived
With the courage of a Knight
In your wrinkles- I see no Wrinkles
Only beauty hidden away
As your wrinkles are threads of time
Accepting with grace.
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I wasn't quite sure where your title would fit in to this poem but the end verse finishes the poem superbly when wrinkles are no longer seen, only threads of time.
I really like what you choose to see in the wrinkles because it doesn't follow the expected path. I love the road as a path of gravel, silk and thorn. 3 really well chosen nouns which are very suggestive of the road itself. And of course, as a writer, how could I not be drawn to the wrinkles as empty pages awaiting the writer's touch. But for me it's the verse on love that stands out, in particular "not seeking but given away." That is a beautiful expression of unconditional love.
Thank you very much dear Bernie! I cannot help but just love the way you
perceive poems, perceive things. Life is pure poetry. Good or tragic. I am
honoured you take time for my poems. Cheers!
Sometimes Bernadette, sometimes. Thank you.
I love how you've used 'wrinkles' in your write Bernadete because they seem to be a thing of the past these days and those who don't conform to botox and fillers are seen as an oddity rather than the norm. Old age was once a thing respected for all the reasons you have written about so beautifully ..alas now it is frowned on. Lovely write x
Beautiful words and sentiment.
Excellent poem throughout Bernadete with its captivating theme.
So good to see and wish all poems were this original and engaging and beautifully written.
Full honours bestowed and richly deserved and I hope all is well with you.
Mr Cronick, coming from you this is a big compliment. I am humbled by your comment and I thank you for taking the time to read my writings. Nice to meet you Shaun!
Just Shaun will suffice and darn it, I forgot to say welcome to Cosmo Bernadete.
My bad.
So, welcome to Cosmo Bernadete!!
And nice to meet and read you!!
Will read more tomorrow and catch up and looking forward to doing so.
All the best and all good things to you, your imagination and your poetry pen :)
What an excellent piece.
Wisdom expressed
An exceptionally good poem of epic proportion .. I take my hat off to both you and your pen .. Neville