Throw Your Weight

Hi Jim,
Clever write -
but then it's you!
Regards,
Terry.
xo

Love anything nautical being a fishermans daughter so “Arrr Him lad tis soo good” ❤️💙❤️

Jim so wickedly well written, the build up and then your payoff!
Loved it!
David and Goliath springs to mind.
Thanks Jim and I wish you well sir and full honours to you also.
 

Jim the old five stars has lamentably run aground... for now.
Will try again later.

Excellent stuff Jim...you are a great story teller. Thoroughly enjoyed my friend x

Jim still no joy but pinned for a daring and hopeful attempt tomorrow evening.
And thanks again for all you moral and poetic support, it means a lot to me sir.
Respect.

🤣🤣🤣  love it!  I was expecting some sort of nail biting battle with a bit of history maybe thrown in. And when I read

Sir, I don't think you understand who this is, or what exactly you've found!

I thought to myself, "Ooooh!  Somethings occurring!"  

Wow...all I can say is, you set this up perfectly from the very first line for the brilliant ending. What a poem! Exceptional Jim.  I will dredge the ocean for the  extra stars this soooo deserves. 📌 x

This was brilliant Jim. Great story, I agree with all above, the ending was perfect. Reminded me of a fable 🙂☀ awesome share from an awesome poet ❤☀

Hi Jim. Awesome clever nail biting write with a fabulous funny ending!! Keot ke engaged til the end! What a narrative!! Px

Jim such a clever write. You lead the reader to believe some war zone is about to happen. I loved the twist to this well penned tale ✨👏

The poem is amazing ,exciting and loved the ending of the light house . As per usual as all your work is fantastico Jim ! 😊