Time.
My life in 60 seconds.
Itβs down to 58.
Itβs down to 54 now.
I just canβt concentrate.
I think my headβs on backwards.
Iβm on the mountain pass.
Iβm driving around a bend now.
But Iβm thinking of going straight.
My life in 60 seconds.
Counting days like shooting stars.
I feel like theyβre going backwards.
I canβt seem to tell them apart.
My friends, they tell me stories.
And Iβve got some wings to catch.
I know sheβll miss me in a few days.
She knows thereβs no turning back.
My life in 60 seconds.
Goes to damn β way too fast.
I shouldnβt be wishing for the future.
When Iβm still begging for the past.
If I had to make these choices.
If I had to take this chance.
Iβd wanna have it this way always.
And even if I canβtβ¦
See you ever again,
Iβll still remember you,
Till the end of time.
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Comments
I especially love the first two verses...this is a great write Max x
Hi Marion, I especially loved writing them! There's something that comes from writing in the spur of the moment~ Thanks so much~
A lovely muse poem twisting and turning with life's matters summing up your life superbly . Kudos!!
plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Hey Zaynab, long time no see, glad you enjoyed this one mate, hope you have been well!
what a ride!Β
And one I hope you enjoyed Mark, thanks for stopping by~
superb ink Max
Thanks Lisa, glad you liked it~
Hello Max
very much enjoyedΒ
Memories even just those small moments that were lived through ...fab peice much enjoyedΒ
lorna x
Thanks Lorna! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! It was a fun one to write~
It is a ride as Mark says and what a ride!
The clock ticking and never will anyone beat it, so strap yourselves in for the bumpy ride called life.
Great opening verses and a slight change of pace to reach a conclusion and what a conclusion to reach.
One to eternally linger.
Nice one Max and hold on dearly to those memories never let them diminish or ever fade.
Live life to the full and enjoy all the good it can happily bestow my friend :)
Β And respect to you.
Shaun.
Now this one was a fun one! More on the rap style I tend to enjoy. I'm learning that people live lives at different paces but I'm still figuring out mine. Either way I know these days that really, I don't have to keep up or slow down for anyone and there's nothing wrong with that. Glad you enjoyed this fast paced read~
Hi Max, I am reading some poems on Cosmo today and came across to yours. Theyβre unique, different, personal, a sort of soul searching Love it. Β Greetings.Β
Hey Bernadete! Thanks for your kind comment. Been busy as of late, so I haven't been online much. I'm glad you found time to read one of mine. I'm just glad people get something out of what I write.Β
Will be catching up soon also. I hope you've been well! Sincerely,
Max