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Time Trial

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RG
Time Trial

0-60 in 3.4 seconds 
0-heartbreak in 4.5 years 

 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! S.W.!!....what a truly compelling thought!!......I'm still letting that settle in my mind......ALL STARS!!......cleverly delivered.....and oh so poetically placed in the minds eye of the reader!!.....well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  :  )

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Tony, thanks for the remarkable comments and stellar feedback 

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