Poem -
Tinder
Β Amber tinders how it churned
Upon swelter, lesson learned
Neβer engage igneous fire
Ignited flesh, mars transpire
Rapt in misguided trance
Flames entwined fury dance
Within allure belies pain
Tempted by kindle reign
Wax flees midst heat
Forging hasty retreat
Blistered foolish touch
Bested by seductive clutch
Apathetic tis vexing spark
Cossets only plenary dark
Havoc simmers akin
Tattooed on vulnerable skin
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Comments
enjoyed by me & then some .. I particularly liked the very subtle, almost subliminal erotic metaphor .. but then I'm just an old fella who scribbles every now & then :)
Thank you Neville.Β
Some truly stunning lines in this write. For me it read like a metaphor for temptation. Be careful as you can get burnedΒ
βBlistered foolish touch
Bested by seductive clutchβ
just wow...I could go on xΒ
Gwen you are just way too kind lol thank you!
Can almost feel.the heat, you write so well Lisa x
thank you Marion. Because I only adhere to one rhyme scheme I try to put as much imagery in my workΒ
awesome write! you're on fire!.....................................................................Jim
thank you Jim