Poem -

Tiptoeing Through The Surf

Tiptoeing Through The Surf

Captivated by the waves as they crash into his feet 

Getting close to dark but no curfew today is hard to beat 

Gazing at all things that God created is so deeply profound 

With clouds colored red ,blues floating up above and all around 

Having the time of his life is a understatement with his intellect on full display 

Looking for creatures big and small

Trying to understand the meaning of it all

As the sun sets low beyond yonder God's heavenly veil 

The sky is so alive with wonder he can hardly sit still 

He is tiptoeing through the surf no stress,no worries in his line of sight

Just living childlike expressions in his reality which encompasses his dreams to wish him a goodnight 

dedicated to my son who I love with all my heart.

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Bradford

Hey lisa thanks . I believe this is one of my best poems .it took 2 days to finish. He is my inspiration for sure and is very smart like his daddy. Hugs to you bradford 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Rock Lovely write dedicated your son 
memories of  days like these are so
precious they grow up so fast
I Enjoyed Thank you for sharing 
Best wishes Debs 
 

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Bradford

Thanks debs glad you enjoyed this write.  Picture was taken in florida on his first day at the beach. Loved picture and poem I wrote for him. You are right ,they will only be young once . Hugs to you rock 

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Larry Ran

My dear Brother Rock,

What more could a son ask for, than a loving Father who pours his soul out to him in a heartfelt poem. Your love for him shines in every line.  He is the surf of your existence.  His gentle waves captivate you.  When surrounded by his beauty, you are complete.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Bradford

Hey larry thanks it means alot , your wonderful comments,  he is what motivates me on a daily basis , love is harder to come by these days . Take care rock 

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