Poem - 08 April 2019, 12:53

Tomorrow is ours

Ripples in the water,
Patterns in the sand,
Echoes on the wind,
Destiny in our hands.

Memories in abundance,
Dreams of tomorrow,
Till our nigh summons,
Cast away sorrow.

Strength in our pain,
Love in our hearts,
Everything to gain,
Yesterday apart.

Everything to live for,
Nothing set in stone,
Our fate is ours and more,
Our life, our path we own.

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sally08 May 2019, 15:06

Amazing Poem Simon!
I feel like you get even more brilliant every time :)
Pin for prosperity!
Congratulations on a well-deserved win!

Simon Bromley08 April 2019, 20:54

Aww thank you your very kind.

T Starbuck08 April 2019, 16:20

I really like this, there is a beautiful sense of flow to the words and a hypnotic feel in the way you convey them...outstanding I thought.
Cheers
T

Simon Bromley08 April 2019, 20:55

Thank you my friend. Your words mean alot to me.

Terry Kay08 April 2019, 20:34

Simon, .I think this is a brilliant piece. Loved it. Terry Kay

Simon Bromley08 April 2019, 20:55

Thank you Terry your support means everything.

Terry Kay08 April 2019, 22:03

Simon, .I haven't been around for a while and you are quite welcome and deserving of praise!. Love, Terry Kay

Simon Bromley09 April 2019, 00:02

Thank you very much Terry you have made my day.

Edward Williams09 April 2019, 14:44

Love it Simon .. awesome poem so well crafted it reminded me of a lyric in “ stairway to heaven “
” there’s still time to change the road your on”

Simon Bromley09 April 2019, 21:04

Thank you once again. Our choices are our own.

Ian William08 May 2019, 01:42

Well done Simon and well deserved!

Simon Bromley08 May 2019, 02:15

Thank you Ian means alot

Jill Tait08 May 2019, 07:06

This is my fav from winners Well Done Simon :)?

Simon Bromley08 May 2019, 08:30

Aww Jill thank you kindly.

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐08 May 2019, 12:40

congrats for an awesome win!

Simon Bromley08 May 2019, 12:34

Thanks Lisa :-)

Tony Taylor08 May 2019, 19:22

Hey SIMON!!.....I REALLY like what you've done here...... from stanza to stanza........ starts with ~

                  Stanza #1 ~ Recognition......of the symbols and patterns in our
                                       Past & our destiny

                  Stanza #2 ~ The Remembering....... where we've come from
                                       Promoting our potential for tomorrow

                   Stanza #3 ~ Solidifying the strength inherent in our collective
                                        Pain & realization of what we might gain

                   Stanza #4 ~ Understanding...... that nothing is set in stone in
                                       Our collective future..." Our fate is ours.." alone..

ALL STARS!!....... definitely a Win Worthy write...... and certainly one to be proud of my dear poetic brother!!....... Peace n Stuff!!......T xo ?✴❤

Simon Bromley08 May 2019, 21:02

Thank you Tony it means everything to me to be recognised and i am determined to get better and better. Thank you very much for your incredible support.

Rose Sho09 May 2019, 08:56

Congratulations on a well deserved win...Well done, Simon

Simon Bromley09 May 2019, 09:14

Thank you Rose :-)

lodigiana13 May 2019, 09:34

A little late reading this but my goodness the wait was worth it! It's such a delight to read and absorb, beautifully written and with a fabulous flow and rhythm to it..I loved it! Lodigiana xx

Simon Bromley19 May 2019, 09:32

Aww thank you so much.