Poem -

too many shadows

too many shadows

too many shadows
only one me
     where did
when did
 how did I collect so many?
 will I find a dot of light
that will pull me through?

dashed within and against
 between and before
I knew
 lift away self of me
bring me to that light
 of love  forever   
never... to leave 

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Gwendoline

Hello Mitch 
this is such a beautiful forlorn poem. The ever reaching out, seeking light when only feeling darkness, illuminates to the reader wonderfully well here. 

Thanks for sharing 
Gwen x

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Mitch Bensel

thank you Gwen for listening and reading ...  

have a wonderful day

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

A morose muse, appealing and the light of love removes shadows yes. Kudos!

Plz  pleez request u to read and comment my newest poem too.

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